Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

A few grammatical errors but I can feel your sentiment behind this poem. Another heartfelt piece. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts with us. Have a great day. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Why thank you Jacqueline and this was a rust job while I was waiting for my bus.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for sharing this with us.

No cow ju.ps over that Moon. (jumps?)

Whatnot the only thing that's great? (Whatnot doesn't make sense)

Someone's waiting g for this Gift from me and you. (extra 'g')

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

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reply by the author on 06-May-2023

Thanks Barbara and this was a rush job while waiting for the bus.
I did catch some of the hours while on the bus.
Doctor Ricky