Spring Is Here
Tells of the beauty and comfort of spring3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-5-5 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-5-5 writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 05-May-2023
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed rest your poem and I could relate to it. I, too, feel that when Spring comes, everything seems brighter and the wind gets warmer. I love your personification and, if I could add another, Spring gives a warm hug to us, as if to say, "I know Winter was tough, let me give you a hug." Your poem made me view Spring that way. That's good writing!
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I enjoyed rest your poem and I could relate to it. I, too, feel that when Spring comes, everything seems brighter and the wind gets warmer. I love your personification and, if I could add another, Spring gives a warm hug to us, as if to say, "I know Winter was tough, let me give you a hug." Your poem made me view Spring that way. That's good writing!
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much! I am glad that my poem made you feel good. That is what writing should do!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
What a pretty Spring Palm and Spring is my favorite season for your pick up perfect subject. You're the cat she's well quite pretty. I'm finding your Palm to be sweet and light and exactly what's needed sometimes gave me a smile too so that is a go of room to write it in so good job!
I see no grammatical issues and aesthetically pleasing and I think it's a very good submission to the competition. Good luck and have a great day!
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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What a pretty Spring Palm and Spring is my favorite season for your pick up perfect subject. You're the cat she's well quite pretty. I'm finding your Palm to be sweet and light and exactly what's needed sometimes gave me a smile too so that is a go of room to write it in so good job!
I see no grammatical issues and aesthetically pleasing and I think it's a very good submission to the competition. Good luck and have a great day!
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.