Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi Ricky, so sensual my sweet friend...

who better to fantasize an evening with...
in your heart and mind...only to want her
forever...Luna herself...

I love...We took a walk along the edge of
"The Sea of Tranquility". Where in the moonlight
we could dine. On each other's Souls so Devine.

I love your poem sweet guy...and I love your story told...
there is something said for daydreaming...sigh...

well done Ricky...and what a stunning picture...perfect...
so good to see you...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 04-May-2023

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reply by the author on 05-May-2023

First off thanks for your review and I'm glad this moonlit romance touched your soul.
I've always had a fascination when it came to the Moon cuz it's so close to us and so large and so visible even by the human eye.
Why don't you and me take a rocket ship to the Moon?
We'll live in a Moon crater and eat green cheese!
And tell the rest of this s***** world.
See y'all later!
Doctor Ricky

reply by l.raven on 06-May-2023

Hi Ricky, you almost had me my sweet friend...
until you said green cheese...LOL...

you sweet guy are so very welcome...always...
look forward to seeing you soon...love xxoo
🙏🤗🌼🚀🌛

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I feel a sense of being content and satisfied. Just loving and basking in that feeling. As if I am sitting out o a clear night by the lake under the stars with the one I love.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 04-May-2023

I'm glad that I gave you a wonderful memory, perhaps from the past?
And thanks for stopping by Mia!
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, Thank you for sharing this part of your reality with us. I am wondering who this person is and how it ends.

Golden ss a gem. (?)

But I knew in my Broken Heart (period??)

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thanks you Barb and I corrected these Issues.
Doctor Ricky1024'

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is pleasing to the eye. I tells of your love for Luna the Moon. I found two typos that I suggest you might want to change. You wrote I met her on a whim and a dare but you spelled it wim instead. Plus, the line that says I mean must now insist makes so sense to me.
Otherwise, this speaks of your love of Luna in no uncertain terms.
Jesse

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Yeah I was standing in the dark waiting for a bustle Atlantic City road right and trying to get it completed but the bus came too quick!
And now it's been many hours later that I've had a chance to check the reviews and clean it up.
Thanks for your review and tip Jesse and enjoy your day.
Doctor Ricky

reply by Jesse James Doty on 03-May-2023

Glad I could help.
Have a wonderful day as well!
Jesse

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

This is a very saucy interesting read, Doc!

This line was an attention grabber:
We took a walk along the Sea of Tranquility.

And the last line was a perfect ending.

Solid work, my friend.
D

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

The last time I wrote about her she had a date with Jesus Christ.
You hitched a ride on the Halley's comet.
He was traveling so long. He was thirsty so as he was flyng over to the moon.
He saw to see a tranquility.
He wound up knocking on Luna's door.
She was having a moon bath in her glow shower.
She came to the door wrapped with a towel.
Before you know what they were on a date.
They walked along to see a tranquility holding hands.
They went to the moon diner and had moon pies for lunch.
But of course he had to come back to Earth to be crucified!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky