Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very pretty presentation along with Your words were authentic and soulful. Your descriptive words are powerful.Sycj good writng! I enjoyed reading, and Best wishes!

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

I like the acceleration of pace between the first and second parts that throws one headlong into the blissful resolution of true and conjoint love expressed in your finale.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you for the exceptional six stars review, Tony. It means a lot coming from you. Have a wonderful day or night, as it may be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Your poem entitled
*Caught in the Wind of Love"
And your artwork.
Yes, reminds me of the famous Marilyn Monroe picture.
When she's walking over to New York. Street grate and the wind blows her dress up in the air!
Well presented and thanks for sharing!
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A whirlwind romantic write as two souls come together as one and enjoy the union of hearts and minds, a fine presentation with vibrant colours here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That sounds like someone who is truly love struck. I can't say I ever had this feeling so you must feel these passions so much more than me. I'm glad you can articulate it so well in poetry!

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 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Your love lasts a lifetime, mine burns out on both ends of the candle.

I never felt as pretty as when I dated my ex. I saw myself through his eyes. It's a feeling I will never forget. Because I felt pretty I was pretty. I don't know if that makes sense.

Thank you very much, Big Sister. You always get me.

Love,
MariVal

reply by lyenochka on 02-May-2023

You are pretty!! 💖😻💕

reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you, big sister, you see with the eyes of love and God.

reply by lyenochka on 03-May-2023

And God sees us with the eyes of Love and He sees our spirits which are eternal! 💖

reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you, big sister. I do feel loved by God