Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

This club entry is a very passionate poem. The following descriptions are perfect for the sensuality of the poem. You have taste, sight, and touch. Have a feeling there's some hearing and smelling in there too.

delicious sweet lips

lost in your blue eyes

warm touch makes me insane

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

You are right, this poem touches all the senses.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was indeed a beautiful poem, Gypsy. Your words were perfectly in line, they presented a well done truth. I loved your dual pictures which were created out of love. Blessed Be n Hugs!

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

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reply by the author on 03-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 03-May-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

hungry for lips and lost in eyes
this was a very sesnsual kojiki
cool pics and colour scheme, too

good work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you, Shelley :)

gypsy hugs

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Queen,
Your last line made me start singing... You were made for loving me baby... I was made for loving you, by KISS. So appropriate!

Yes, I love kissing, full stop... can't ever have too much lipping... and well, all over kissing. Better stop there... should I? Smile((((((((((.

Beautiful presentation, beautiful thought.

With our thoughts we create...
a physical reaction.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you very much, James. I am happy I launched you into singing. Kissing is one of my favorite things to do. Robert and I could kiss for hours LoL I appreciate your lovely review and kind words. Take care of yourself.

Gypsy kisses

reply by Jumbo J on 02-May-2023

Smile((((((((((((((((.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

To know that someone has been made to love you, is quite the revelation, but the certainty always remains in the lap of time, permanence is swathed in time. Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

I thought we were made for each other and I thank God every day but he had other plans.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 02-May-2023

Yes He did

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This is definitely a passionate love poem! It's a beautiful thing when each of the lovers is confident of being made perfectly made to love the other. But that level of passion is hard to keep nurtured in life.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. I thought we were made for each other and I thank God every day but Robert had other plans. We were two broken people with a painful past. I thought he was the one but he kept looking for something new all the time.

Love,

Marival ❤️

reply by lyenochka on 02-May-2023

Then he really wasn't the one. Sigh.

reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Yes, you are right. I had that kind of relationship once but it didn't last. I remember thanking God every day. I was so grateful that I had found Robert. I really thought he was the one. We were two broken people with a difficult life. He is the kind of person that keeps looking for something new.

Thank you very much, Big Sister. We are learning the Kojiki poetic form in our club. It's based on history, the poet's or the world.

Love
MariVal