Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

So Thomas climbed in a casket and slept during the night with his lover, Jennifer. Evidently she must have died prior as she was boney. I'm thinking this story takes place in a cemetery being the night owl is hooting. Another supernatural scary story.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

Comment from Mia Twysted

Good

I had to reread the piece for clarity. When I did, I had a better sense of the spookiness that it contained. Life after death and the loss of love is always good for a haunting tail.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

Comment from Cathy M

Good

This was an enchanting outline of a longer story. I can't wait to see if you enlarge this imaginative out take. I felt this was more micro than flash, and would love to read more.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A most Imaginative story, one of those things that sits in the corner of one's mind, but every now and then pops up, a little differently expressed, this is different, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Creepy, but a very good story for the supernatural flash fiction. It is a twisted ending and that works very well here. Your descriptions create a convincing setting and a nice slow pace.

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

didn't see that ending coming...
a great flash story!
kept me interested and it had a smooth flow from beginning to end
cool pic to accompany as well

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 01-May-2023