Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is lovely, Marival. I particularly like your beautiful description of the dress.
The Pinterest picture you've chosen is lovely as well.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Thank you very much, you are very kind. I'm happy you like it. Have a beautiful day.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

Comment from Janel Mock

Excellent

Reading this made me feel magical and I do not get that fuzzy feeling often! I love the darkness of the background and your images. I am a moon child, so I personally love this.
~Janel

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 02-May-2023

Janel, thank you for the exceptional review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought a little sparkle to our eyes with this magical write full of tinsel and bright thoughts for a sleep head, our dreams forever sprinkled with magical dust, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello, Gypsy!
I love the optimism and lilt to your poetic offering. You always handle the Gogyohka poetic form so well!
A most enjoyable poetic form and message!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

The fantasy and the imagery of this poem are perfect. Once again you proved why you're the best poet on this site. You never have a bad poem. They're always great and this one is even better than great.

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Wow, thank you very much, Barbara, you are very kind. Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was indeed a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. The picture was perfect for the idea of landing near her head. Your words of the tanka were priceless, I can envision all of this happening. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 02-May-2023

Great job, Gypsy.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Comment on this post this is another lovely presentation from you and I did enjoyed it very much It uses very beautiful language, it's brief and to the point. Patricia

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

That's the shot, I wonder if being dressed in a starry sequinned dress, would wake someone, but then again being dressed in all the exciting things of creation, would be be wonderful, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

It's a poetic phrase, not meant to be logical.

I really did dreamed I could fly when I was little. It was a lot of fun.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 02-May-2023

Me too Gypsy, I used imaginary flight to escape bullies

Comment from Kerry Foley

Exceptional

You always amaze me Gypsy.

This is absolutely stunning in your whole presentation with your pictures. Oh it's breathtaking.

Very much enjoyable!


Kerry

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

Thank you very much, Kerry, for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Enjoyed your fanciful poem. I like the switch for when the moon shows up in the poem, perhaps it means when it is night, all the dreams of the narrator comes to the loved one.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 01-May-2023

I remember flying in my dreams when I was little. It felt so real. I wish I could still do it.

Thank you very much for your insightful review, and helpfull feedback.

Love,
Marival ❤️