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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Golden Moments of Time"
My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from royowen
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I think we are partially to blame for our own dilemma, by not trying to figure out why we go through hell to get to heaven, faith is actually believing that things work together for good, and rest in that, agonising changes nothing, but faith helps us move on. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thanks Roy my religious brother here on Fanstory.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 05-May-2023
    Bless you
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
Comment from Mia Twysted
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It is hard to move on without those we love, without those we never thought we would lose. They say time heals all wounds, but that simply is not true.

 Comment Written 01-May-2023


reply by the author on 01-May-2023
    Why thank you for your view Mia and yes your words ring true.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Again, thank you for sharing this with us.

My mind still so tortured Jay and I still don't know exactly what what to do? (comma after 'Jay' you switched subjects and only one 'what')

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Well this is actually a new piece based on the old subject of course and thanks for your review Barbara.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I had to six it. This was sublimely open and openly sublime.

A contradiction of contradictions that mirrors life for so many of us in the redundant loop of incredible loss and tragedy.

Brilliantly portrayed, good Doctor!
Sincerely Igor

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks Douglas and every word you post here.
    Multiply times 1 million.
    And then you'll come no where near close to what I'm feeling.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from pome lover
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Dr. Ricky,
Maybe I have this all wrong, but it seems to me, this was written for your son, whose organs were donated to someone, but I don't understand the part about not a single word from your son, or kiss on your cheek. Was it another son who received them?

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your review.
    Note; On March 31st 2003.
    My only son Jason was a passenger involved in a horrible car accident.
    17 hours later after being airlifted by helicopter.
    Along with the driver Brian Cole.
    Brian was only 17 and mentally ill.
    Supposedly he did it on a dare throwing the time when they had the movie.
    "Fast and Furious" out.
    Brian was extracted with the jaws of life.
    (While Jason had a heart attack attack on the way)
    After the car was purposely driven into a telephone pole with 100 mph.
    My only son Jason was diagnosed by the state of New Jersey as brain dead.
    As a result a woman from The Gift of Life came to the hospital in Atlantic City New Jersey.
    A decision had to be made what to do with an 18 year old who never did a damn thing wrong his entire life.
    Even the high school came out and donated over $4,000 for we had no insurance.
    What do you do with an Angel?
    Jason's Heart and, lings.
    Jason's kidneys.
    ,Over 20 years later are providing life to three individuals.
    While Jason's liver gave life for 8 years.
    ...
    To learn more about the amazing process of 'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
    Simply contact my dearest friend Lara S Moretti the L.S.W. with "The Gift of Life!"
    Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at
    1-800-DONORS-1.
    And there you got it in a nutshell poem lover.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir here Fanstory"
reply by pome lover on 30-Apr-2023
    Ricky, I'm so sorry. I appreciate your explaining.
    Katharine
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is such a heartfelt write Ricky, full of pain and sorrow and this is something that has haunted you as we feel powerless in these situations, that chilling gnawed grief never subsides, a powerful write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    I thanks for picking this up so quickly. Dolly.
    As the month of April will come to an end, my grieving from the previous month should considerably slow.
    Hopefully?
    Doctor Ricky She