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Old woman speaks.16 total reviews
Comment from egomega
Well-written, thought-provoking story. It actually prompted me to stop scrolling and call my sister. Instead of blanket forts, we talked about tree houses, pony rides and shared childhood memories. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Well-written, thought-provoking story. It actually prompted me to stop scrolling and call my sister. Instead of blanket forts, we talked about tree houses, pony rides and shared childhood memories. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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You are welcome. That sounds like a story all by itself. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is such an endearing story. It was clever to use the appearance of the old woman, seemingly out of nowhere (she didn't get on the bus) to introduce the subject of finding common ground to reconnect. Wise words and wise are those who take them to heart.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This is such an endearing story. It was clever to use the appearance of the old woman, seemingly out of nowhere (she didn't get on the bus) to introduce the subject of finding common ground to reconnect. Wise words and wise are those who take them to heart.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm a sucker for real life, and you certainly have a special knack of taking me back to happier times. The inhouse forts, buttered popcorn, movies with siblings and friends, and listening to older people tell us how time gets faster as we get older. A ridiculous statement that only proves true as we age ourselves. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I'm a sucker for real life, and you certainly have a special knack of taking me back to happier times. The inhouse forts, buttered popcorn, movies with siblings and friends, and listening to older people tell us how time gets faster as we get older. A ridiculous statement that only proves true as we age ourselves. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Now I know your secret. Bwahaha! Thank-you for the awesome review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Faith Williams
Wow, Gretchen, there are some amazing descriptions in this story.
'Her laugh was light, delicate like the waterfall of piano keys,' is a wonderful description. But my favorites are the way you describe the 'color of the wind' for fall and winter. And that spring has 'crowns made of dandelions.' Just beautiful. The story was great, too. Loved that she called her sister to make blanket forts! A great reminder that time is short, and sometimes you just need to find common ground.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Wow, Gretchen, there are some amazing descriptions in this story.
'Her laugh was light, delicate like the waterfall of piano keys,' is a wonderful description. But my favorites are the way you describe the 'color of the wind' for fall and winter. And that spring has 'crowns made of dandelions.' Just beautiful. The story was great, too. Loved that she called her sister to make blanket forts! A great reminder that time is short, and sometimes you just need to find common ground.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you for this awesome review and the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
My younger brother is good to me these days, but there was a time when I had to bail him out of trouble, my parents wouldn't, but that saying, what goes around comes around, we get on well, why? Because seeds were sown. Beautifully written, blessings Roy.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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My younger brother is good to me these days, but there was a time when I had to bail him out of trouble, my parents wouldn't, but that saying, what goes around comes around, we get on well, why? Because seeds were sown. Beautifully written, blessings Roy.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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My brother and sister and I are pretty close despite our age differences. No drama there. Lol. I guess I'm lucky. Gretchen
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I really enjoyed this piece. The older person talking to a younger one about life lessons at a bus stop isn't anything new but how you approached it was lovely. The colours of the seasons is a great way of looking at things.
Very nice work with this.
"Its true. You're young, - It's.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Hi there,
I really enjoyed this piece. The older person talking to a younger one about life lessons at a bus stop isn't anything new but how you approached it was lovely. The colours of the seasons is a great way of looking at things.
Very nice work with this.
"Its true. You're young, - It's.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your little story, Gretchen. It had a smooth
flow and was filled with great imagery. I liked the dialogue, I
believed others could place themselves in the same situation
and realize the old lady was right. Her words were spoken from
one who had gained wisdom in her age and wasn't afraid to share
it with others.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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I enjoyed reading your little story, Gretchen. It had a smooth
flow and was filled with great imagery. I liked the dialogue, I
believed others could place themselves in the same situation
and realize the old lady was right. Her words were spoken from
one who had gained wisdom in her age and wasn't afraid to share
it with others.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much, Jan. I appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
Sometimes it takes the wise words of a stranger to help us recognize what is important before it is too late.
Excellent dialog which brings out the personalities and concerns of the characters, making them real.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Sometimes it takes the wise words of a stranger to help us recognize what is important before it is too late.
Excellent dialog which brings out the personalities and concerns of the characters, making them real.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!! Your words of wisdom are shining through with this post. It's true we are not promised tomorrow, so we need to make amends today. There is always some sort of common ground. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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AMEN!! Your words of wisdom are shining through with this post. It's true we are not promised tomorrow, so we need to make amends today. There is always some sort of common ground. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Barbara. Your review is much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
I really enjoyed reading this story. The dialogue was so believable and easy to read, and the theme was one that is needed now more than ever I think. It made me think of the movie Forrest Gump, the bus stop scene. Well done gal! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hello Gretchen,
I really enjoyed reading this story. The dialogue was so believable and easy to read, and the theme was one that is needed now more than ever I think. It made me think of the movie Forrest Gump, the bus stop scene. Well done gal! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Why thank you. I enjoy writing stories and telling stories. The writing comes easy if you let the characters tell it. I really appreciate this awesome review. Thank you. Gretchen