An April Fool
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "OTC (over-the-counter)"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from royowen
What a good little write, and this seems to be an inspired poem about just such things, there are so many things we can suffer from, and this is a great little post dear Alicia, well done, blessings Roy
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What a good little write, and this seems to be an inspired poem about just such things, there are so many things we can suffer from, and this is a great little post dear Alicia, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Note: An apple a day will keep Doctor feel not too good away.
Yes, but a banana a day?
Yes, will keep the psychiatrist away.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
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This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Note: An apple a day will keep Doctor feel not too good away.
Yes, but a banana a day?
Yes, will keep the psychiatrist away.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes there is a place for herbal medicine in society and many swear by these products. As we age I think we need a few supplements to keep us going, a fine post Alicia, love Dolly x
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Yes there is a place for herbal medicine in society and many swear by these products. As we age I think we need a few supplements to keep us going, a fine post Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, I think we do look to those over-the-counter solutions to all the ailments in life. But sometimes, we need to just let our bodies rest to recuperate. I hope you are feeling completely recovered now!
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Yes, I think we do look to those over-the-counter solutions to all the ailments in life. But sometimes, we need to just let our bodies rest to recuperate. I hope you are feeling completely recovered now!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
Comment from Julie Lau
Ah! OTC products can cure so much . Where would we be without them? Would we have greater natural immunity? Or be sicker? Or deader? I guess we'll never know unless we are willing to make the experiment. Thank you for your thought-provoking poem.
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Ah! OTC products can cure so much . Where would we be without them? Would we have greater natural immunity? Or be sicker? Or deader? I guess we'll never know unless we are willing to make the experiment. Thank you for your thought-provoking poem.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2023