Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Very cute. It's not as easy to write a poem each day, as some people.might think. You did well with the challenge. In a few words you made em smile. Good writing! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you. To make them smile and be happy with their achievement is a good thing.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

One thing about writing for this contest, you must know ahead of schedule so you write the correct amount of poetry. The fellow does look like he's a bit puzzled.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you very much Rosemary.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you Raul.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good haiku and presentation entry for the 5/7/5 poem contest. Correct syllables and line count. It's one of my favorites. Good luck in the contest!

gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Gypsy. Glad you like it.

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Author,
I love the simplicity of your poem, along with the deeper meaning.
The 30-day poem challenge is a difficult one. Good luck in the contest and with all your writing.
Blessings

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you. Hopefully each participant could smile with satisfaction and pleasure, and feel acknowledged.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for noting the efforts on all who participated in the National Poetry Writing Month. Hope you join in next year! A fun poem for the last day of April. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you for a super review. Not sure I could do that!! Thank you too for the good wishes.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

I did not accept the challenge nor write a poem every day for thirty days, but I did find yours funny!

Nice write up and very fitting for the humorous Haiku contest.
D

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much. No, I didn't do it either.

Comment from Calene

Excellent

Haha! I love this! It's simple and cute. Great work! And, indeed, writing poems every day is a big accomplishment. Great job to everyone who did!

~Calene

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for reviewing. Lol. They deserve our smiles and congratulations after all that work.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I would think those who SUCCESSFULLY made it through this month of writing a poem a day have big smiles. And I, like the poet here, wish to congratulate you all. You are indeed amazing.
Rod

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thank you very much Rod. Lovely review. Some who didn't complete the challenge may have rueful smiles. But they all still did their best and deserve congratulations.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This one does make me smile as I imagine all those who have attempted this challenge of a poem a day, and I do hope it has remained fun for them all, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for a very kind review. Perhaps the others who were unsuccessful have a rueful smile. The main thing is they all tried their best, and deserve congratulations for their effort.