Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Excellent, evocative and eye-catching, a lovely little verse to qualify for this contest! Good choice of imagery picking out her nails to illustrate her penchant for violence! I can almost hear her! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

A great Disney movie from year's past. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao , I think she is the villain in that story where there are 101(?) Dalmatians.

I don't know the plot but I do like Dalmatians.

My cousin Renata bought two for her grown up kids : Leon and Jenna

Jenna got the male Moby and I dogsat him 5/6 times ..he passed away last year at age 10.

Leon got the female , her name escapes me now at break of dawn 5.55.

She died at a young age due to a bad seizure ( sigh) .

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Yes, 101 Dalmations was the name of the original movie many years ago.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

An evil wicked Cruella Deville who was obsessed with black and white and had to own all those Dalmatians, a craze woman in this uniques and clever story by Dodie Smith, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

yep. Thanks

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

well, i hope she had 10 fingers LOL

a fun 5-7-5 with good connection between the lines and smooth flow

one suggestion i have is maybe try a dark red background and a white font to blend in with the pic? just a thought ;)


thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

That's a good idea. Would show her true evil ways! Thanks