The Whine
One needs to pay attention, when a dog begs to go out.4 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Absolute eye-catching fun and humour! It perfectly fits the brief (although, for dog owners, it could equally qualify for 'poem in your pocket' category!) Syllable count perfect. Well done for bringing a smile to my face! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Absolute eye-catching fun and humour! It perfectly fits the brief (although, for dog owners, it could equally qualify for 'poem in your pocket' category!) Syllable count perfect. Well done for bringing a smile to my face! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Pleased you had a smile. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from LisaMay
Well this certainly made me smile - Revenge was sweet for the dog! but I fear for the poor pooch. If its owner is so selfish as to not let doggy out for a pee, then the owner will also probably punish it for its choice of bathroom.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Well this certainly made me smile - Revenge was sweet for the dog! but I fear for the poor pooch. If its owner is so selfish as to not let doggy out for a pee, then the owner will also probably punish it for its choice of bathroom.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Hope not. I choose to believe that the owner might have had a hangover, and recognize his culpability in the matter and thus forgive the poor doggie.
Comment from jessizero
This 5-7-5 definitely made me laugh. I am so tired of my dogs playing the "in and out" game. I want to tell them I'm not getting up anymore, but I know they would do something to get revenge. Peeing in a shoe is a funny way to do that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This 5-7-5 definitely made me laugh. I am so tired of my dogs playing the "in and out" game. I want to tell them I'm not getting up anymore, but I know they would do something to get revenge. Peeing in a shoe is a funny way to do that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the read and feedback. Glad you got a laugh.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Aw, poor pup. And poor shoe, too. Serves one right for not taking the dog out sooner. Be grateful that the dog didn't leave more surprises. Lol! This was the funniest revenge I've read so far.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Aw, poor pup. And poor shoe, too. Serves one right for not taking the dog out sooner. Be grateful that the dog didn't leave more surprises. Lol! This was the funniest revenge I've read so far.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you again for taking the time to read and for the six star honor.
