This Time Just For Fun
You're fun!2 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
lol yea, i'd classify this as a just for fun 5-7-5!
and the theme as well LOL!
good one - great connection between all three lines
totally cool picture
one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a gold font to blend in with the pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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lol yea, i'd classify this as a just for fun 5-7-5!
and the theme as well LOL!
good one - great connection between all three lines
totally cool picture
one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a gold font to blend in with the pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you for a great review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, This Time Just for Fun, has the proper formatting and finds a way to separate the "just for fun" kissing from the more serious endeavors.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This 5-7-5, This Time Just for Fun, has the proper formatting and finds a way to separate the "just for fun" kissing from the more serious endeavors.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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There are more serious endeavors implied in this?
(said tongue-in-cheek)
Thank you for the review.