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Comment from Regina Elliott
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Oh my gosh, this is a poetic
tapestry of love for God and
family. So very heartfelt and
comes from your loving soul.
Bless your kind and caring
â?¥ Debi!

 Comment Written 08-May-2023


reply by the author on 08-May-2023
    Oh Sweet Regina, you amaze me with your big heart. Thank you so much for not only the bonus stars, kind words and the lovely review, but for being such an awesome friend. I appreciate you and the beautiful review package so much!

    I am trying to get as much written as I can before I go in for my first surgery next month, so any extra info about yourself for me to add to your birthday poem would be greatly appreciated.
reply by Regina Elliott on 08-May-2023
    Bless your sweet and caring ♥
    I'm a former sportswoman, in
    swimming, cross-country, and I
    was also an equestrienne. I'm from
    Long Island, NY, and I miss NY, but
    have been living in North Carolina
    for over 35 years. My dear late
    husband is from Asheville where we
    reside. My daughter and son-in-law
    have charming Southern accents
    that I love. I joined the Navy at the
    age of 22. I met my husband in
    the Navy all those years ago. I didn't
    stay in long, he was in for 8 years.
    Then, we moved to Raleigh, NC,
    then 3 years later to Asheville.
    He was a sweetheart, we miss him
    very much. He is interred at the
    State Veteran's Cemetery which is
    30 minutes from our home by car.
    I'm also an artist, and former
    cake artist (did cake decorating for
    about 25 years.) I love the Lord
    and try to be a good Christian so
    I can be with Him someday. Oh,
    Debi, your address is in my room
    somewhere, but I can't find it, could
    you please give me your address
    again. Will start praying for you
    being in surgery next month. Love
    and in Jesus Name, Regina.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Congratulations on your win, Debi. This is a great poem to carry in your pocket. Though we may not see our grandchildren every day, we can whisper their names to the Lord in prayer, knowing that He is watching over them.

 Comment Written 07-May-2023


reply by the author on 07-May-2023
    Awe, thank you so much Anne. You are so sweet and I don't have the words to tell you how much I appreciate your awesome review and kind words, plus the lovely six stars. Except, thank you again sweet friend.
    There is a handful of friends who have reviewed me all the time and that I have come so close to, so as a thank you , I have your birthday down for June 22nd. Is that correct? I am having eye surgeries done on the 14th & 28th, so am going to try to get them done before then. If there is anything extra you can tell me before then, I would appreciate it very much. Thanks dear friend.
reply by Anne Johnston on 07-May-2023
    You are welcome, Debi. Yes my birthday is June 22, and I will be 85.
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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Well this perfectly penned pocket poem has my vote!! I absolutely love the message, it brought a huge smile to my face. It was uplifting and hopeful and precisely what I'd imagine a pocket poem to be!!
Xo
Jess

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thank you so much Jessica for your lovely review and sweet words. I do appreciate your gift of extra stars so much too. You are so kind.
Comment from Heather Bagley
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I love this! I love the message of no one being able to take away our right to prayer, despite the current state of the world. God bless the grandkids!

 Comment Written 01-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    Heather, thank you so much for you awesome review of my poem, the six stars that you honor me, and your very kind words. You can't possibly know how much it means to me. Thanks again dear friend.
Comment from Janel Mock
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God is good. I love this. We all need a good prayer in our pocket to help us get through our daily lives and much more than that. God bless you! :)
~Janel

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much for your kind comments for my poem!
    I appreciate it very much!
Comment from ESOSTINE
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The poem flowed smoothly with rhymes unforced. I am sure the kids and grand kids will equally love to carry this poem in their pockets to inspire them hope to ensure that your constant prayers/wish for them come true. Well done, dear, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much Estostine, for your kind comments for my poem!
    I appreciate it very much! I appreciate your awesome gift of six stars too!
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a poem for your pocket and for your family to keep. . Your few Words describe your love of faith and family. The image goes well with your words also. I enjoyed reading your poem. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 01-May-2023
    Hey there Sweetie. I appreciate your kind words for this one. It was a fun one to write after I figured out what I would keep in my pocket if I were to keep one in my pocket. It for sure would be a prayer.. Thanks again.
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Poet,

I hope your family enjoyed the sentimental much as I did. The rhymes are delightful and I hope we all have a poem in our pocket with a prayer in our hearts.

Kim

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Hi Kim, I thank you so much for you awesome review of my poem and prayer for my grandchildren, and for your very kind words. You can't possibly know how much it means to me. Thanks again dear friend.
Comment from Sally Law
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I so enjoyed your pocket full of prayers for your grandchildren, mystery poet. A great reminder too of the need for prayer and the precious gift of our children and grandchildren. Marvelous offering!

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :)) xoxo

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Thank you so much Sally for your very sweet and kind review and words for this poem. I appreciate it more than you know.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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I can guess who wrote this poem. It is full of love and feeling. Including the prompt subject matter in the poem was a clever idea. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    I appreciate your kind review and comments for my prayer pocket poem for my grandchildren. Thank you so much!