Homelessness
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Love it. Never surrender. Never give up. Sally forth and speak boldly.
Speak truth, your right earned in the flames of tragedy.
Be the Christian warrior. Fight your battles on your knees.
You are wise, my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Love it. Never surrender. Never give up. Sally forth and speak boldly.
Speak truth, your right earned in the flames of tragedy.
Be the Christian warrior. Fight your battles on your knees.
You are wise, my friend.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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As I travel through this land of Fantory.
Trying my best to rewrite it in all my glory.
Giving credit to Tom Enis each and every poem.
But it seems to always be he's just ET without a home!
Sometimes I think this could be my fan story after all I did start my own years ago.
$1,500 got stolen but that was okay.
Because since then I've gone a long long way!
Thanks for the Allocade.
You're my muse!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
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And you?re my friend!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have faith in God that all will work out.
It's 458 a.m. (4:58 A.M. I don't normally say anything about a.m. but technically it's wrong. I had to comment on the 458)
Yes is that I am a warrior and I will never stop stop until there's *Victory! (comma after 'Yes' & one after 'warrior' & one 'stop' is enough)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I have faith in God that all will work out.
It's 458 a.m. (4:58 A.M. I don't normally say anything about a.m. but technically it's wrong. I had to comment on the 458)
Yes is that I am a warrior and I will never stop stop until there's *Victory! (comma after 'Yes' & one after 'warrior' & one 'stop' is enough)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thanks Barbera.
I gave this 2 minutes and cleaned it up and rewrote it a bit.
I think it's much better!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Aaron Milavec
You have some deep stories to tell. You are still trying to express yourself clearly....
You write: The middle of last October I helped it indigent woman who had not eaten in 3 days or bathed in one week.
After caring for this person for 2 and 1/2 months it turned on me like a rapid dog!
It went to the local police department after we had a heated argument and lied that I had a gun and I was going to shoot it
My edit is this:
Last October I shared my home with an indigent woman who had not eaten in three days and not bathed in one week. After caring for her in my home for two and a half months, she suddenly turned on me like a rapid dog! After one of our heated argument that threated to turn violent, I snapped out of my good Samaritan posture and reported her to the local police. To put some bite into my immediate need to have her expelled from my home, I told the police that I had a loaded gun and was inclined to use it to drive her out. It was a lie, of course. But it did serve to get their attention. . . .
Peace and joy in learning to write our own story,
Aaron
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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You have some deep stories to tell. You are still trying to express yourself clearly....
You write: The middle of last October I helped it indigent woman who had not eaten in 3 days or bathed in one week.
After caring for this person for 2 and 1/2 months it turned on me like a rapid dog!
It went to the local police department after we had a heated argument and lied that I had a gun and I was going to shoot it
My edit is this:
Last October I shared my home with an indigent woman who had not eaten in three days and not bathed in one week. After caring for her in my home for two and a half months, she suddenly turned on me like a rapid dog! After one of our heated argument that threated to turn violent, I snapped out of my good Samaritan posture and reported her to the local police. To put some bite into my immediate need to have her expelled from my home, I told the police that I had a loaded gun and was inclined to use it to drive her out. It was a lie, of course. But it did serve to get their attention. . . .
Peace and joy in learning to write our own story,
Aaron
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Well I thank you so very kindly for your blessed review, comments, and have a wonderful day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Hey Dr. RICKY,
I remember you were alluding to the fact that you have experienced homelessness and that you generously took that woman in. Good actions are rarely being repaid these days, and your action was very charitable and God will see to it that you will be victorious!!!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hey Dr. RICKY,
I remember you were alluding to the fact that you have experienced homelessness and that you generously took that woman in. Good actions are rarely being repaid these days, and your action was very charitable and God will see to it that you will be victorious!!!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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I'm hoping so that God will see through the darkness and bring me into the light.
Thanks and as always,.
Doctor Ricky
