Tanka Collection
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Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, I really like the way you have described spring (taste) instead of smell, wonderfully written and presented, an excellent example of the Tanka form****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Beautiful, I really like the way you have described spring (taste) instead of smell, wonderfully written and presented, an excellent example of the Tanka form****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
One of my favorite places to be during spring is the Tidal Basin in Washington DC because the cherry blossoms are in bloom. It's perfect. Well, it was a few years ago. I have no idea what mess it's in now. Thank you for sharing this package with us. It's beautiful.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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One of my favorite places to be during spring is the Tidal Basin in Washington DC because the cherry blossoms are in bloom. It's perfect. Well, it was a few years ago. I have no idea what mess it's in now. Thank you for sharing this package with us. It's beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for the kind review and wonderful feedback.
Gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your dual pictures of the young lady enjoying the kiss of the sun and cherry blossoms. I immensely liked your words because they showed that warmth and the scent of the cherry blossoms did indeed come true. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I really enjoyed your dual pictures of the young lady enjoying the kiss of the sun and cherry blossoms. I immensely liked your words because they showed that warmth and the scent of the cherry blossoms did indeed come true. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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wow, thank you, Aryr, you honor me with your kind words. I appreciate your exceptional five stars review and positive feedback.
Gypsy hugs
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
Nothing says spring like cherry blossoms. We have a double cherry blossom tree and it blooms as late as May and so we are still waiting for it to bloom. Like that you say "taste spring" bringing in a sense that really experiences in multiple ways.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Nothing says spring like cherry blossoms. We have a double cherry blossom tree and it blooms as late as May and so we are still waiting for it to bloom. Like that you say "taste spring" bringing in a sense that really experiences in multiple ways.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I wish you a wonderful weekend 😀
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
what a lovely image you painted with these words.
Your presentation once again rises to the top to pair words with image and image to coloured font that sets the perfect mood... yes, one can almost taste it!
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
heightened senses.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
what a lovely image you painted with these words.
Your presentation once again rises to the top to pair words with image and image to coloured font that sets the perfect mood... yes, one can almost taste it!
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
heightened senses.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, James (*<>*) I'm always happy to hear from you. Take care of yourself.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from shelley kaye
this was great!
i liked how the form turned out with flowing down smaller
the pictures and colours were perfect
one suggestion - maybe for the title do "cherry blossom kiss" ? singular? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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this was great!
i liked how the form turned out with flowing down smaller
the pictures and colours were perfect
one suggestion - maybe for the title do "cherry blossom kiss" ? singular? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional review, and helpfull feedback. I changed the title, it does sound better.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Such a sweet and beautiful poem. Very nicely written. Its classy and elegant in its simple loveliness. Keep up the great work. You're an excellent poet. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Such a sweet and beautiful poem. Very nicely written. Its classy and elegant in its simple loveliness. Keep up the great work. You're an excellent poet. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from AshleyV
The ombré you used for your text was such a brilliant idea. The changing of color as the blossom prepares for spring. Your words flow so smoothly together as well.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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The ombré you used for your text was such a brilliant idea. The changing of color as the blossom prepares for spring. Your words flow so smoothly together as well.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis