Sunrise
The sun comes up7 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your words made me feel the moment. You added sound to the sight, which created a special light. The picture adds to your beautiful words. Together they are awesome. Great entry.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Your words made me feel the moment. You added sound to the sight, which created a special light. The picture adds to your beautiful words. Together they are awesome. Great entry.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Excellent entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck!!!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That is a sweet little verse, evocative in its disciplined simplicity. Saying so much in so little. It would look great with an image especially if you could put a prompt into FanArtReview with 'dawn' or 'morning sky' or even just 'birds'. These images are free and add so much. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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That is a sweet little verse, evocative in its disciplined simplicity. Saying so much in so little. It would look great with an image especially if you could put a prompt into FanArtReview with 'dawn' or 'morning sky' or even just 'birds'. These images are free and add so much. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That is a good 2,8,2 poem. I'm learning more about poetry here but I enjoyed your poem. You used imagery and sounds to bring the reader in. Good work! :)) Alex
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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That is a good 2,8,2 poem. I'm learning more about poetry here but I enjoyed your poem. You used imagery and sounds to bring the reader in. Good work! :)) Alex
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from shelley kaye
birds tweet
as the darkness becomes the light
dawn wakes
i prefer sunsets, but sunrises are nice too - early morning when few people are up yet LOL
a good entry
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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birds tweet
as the darkness becomes the light
dawn wakes
i prefer sunsets, but sunrises are nice too - early morning when few people are up yet LOL
a good entry
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
And the mercies of God are new every morning, the darkness of yesterday will vanish in the brilliance of this Brand new day, this belongs to those that believe, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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And the mercies of God are new every morning, the darkness of yesterday will vanish in the brilliance of this Brand new day, this belongs to those that believe, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much.
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A pleasure
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing quite like a colourful dawn to start the day, alas, I am never up early enough to see it, but you created the scene here for me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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There is nothing quite like a colourful dawn to start the day, alas, I am never up early enough to see it, but you created the scene here for me, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
