Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Seasons of Mind, Body, Soul III"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
19 total reviews
Comment from karenina
And you have most sincerely written from your soul each of these poems...and I am reluctant to move on and read the final poem of this napowrimo challenge.
If in the writing of these poems you've found as much peace and serenity as you've offered to me, you can rest easy and praise God for your inspiration.
MY soul is fuller for having read what YOUR soul has offered!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
  |
And you have most sincerely written from your soul each of these poems...and I am reluctant to move on and read the final poem of this napowrimo challenge.
If in the writing of these poems you've found as much peace and serenity as you've offered to me, you can rest easy and praise God for your inspiration.
MY soul is fuller for having read what YOUR soul has offered!
Karenina
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
-
🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️
-
Smile...
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have listed the positive attributes of the soul, inviting us to reflect on the good stuff our souls are composed of. Your rhyme scheme flows nicely and the repetition in each stanza adds momentum.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
|
You have listed the positive attributes of the soul, inviting us to reflect on the good stuff our souls are composed of. Your rhyme scheme flows nicely and the repetition in each stanza adds momentum.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
-
Thank you Ginda!
Comment from Julie Lau
Well done with this devotional poem written in five quatrains. I could well imagine this being performed in church with a single voice speaking the first three lines, all voices together on the fourth. Excellent!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
|
Well done with this devotional poem written in five quatrains. I could well imagine this being performed in church with a single voice speaking the first three lines, all voices together on the fourth. Excellent!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
-
Julie, a couple of other FS reviewers have mentioned the same thought. That makes me very humbled and filled with Joy.
Comment from Kerry Foley
ð??? ð???ð??? Bravo!
Once again, an outstanding peace, my friend.
Enjoy your writing!
This is great addition to your book.
Kerry
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
|
ð??? ð???ð??? Bravo!
Once again, an outstanding peace, my friend.
Enjoy your writing!
This is great addition to your book.
Kerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
-
Kerry, thank you. One more poem to go!
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
JLR, the generous and flattering description of man in this a poem helps restore the reader's faith and hope in mankind. If only we could see more of these gleaming traits. Perhaps, its on us. We don't look hard enough to see the good.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
|
JLR, the generous and flattering description of man in this a poem helps restore the reader's faith and hope in mankind. If only we could see more of these gleaming traits. Perhaps, its on us. We don't look hard enough to see the good.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
-
Charles, thanks for your wise words. Yes, we are in short supply, it seems.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi JLR Another lovely poem from you great meter snd rhyme and strong messages in each stanza I enjoy your writing styles
One left to go
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
|
Hi JLR Another lovely poem from you great meter snd rhyme and strong messages in each stanza I enjoy your writing styles
One left to go
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
-
Chris thank you, it is amazing to come to the end?. I hope I have one left in me😅
Comment from patcelaw
The soul of a man is the thing that makes man able to care for others as they should. I enjoyed this poem very much. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. I see that you are one short of your 30 problems for the month of April. I look forward to your finale for the month of April. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
|
The soul of a man is the thing that makes man able to care for others as they should. I enjoyed this poem very much. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. I see that you are one short of your 30 problems for the month of April. I look forward to your finale for the month of April. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
-
Thanks Patricia,
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice! I enjoyed this one. Did you mean to repeat the first stanza in the second last? Also the font appears to have inconsistent size. Otherwise a very enjoyable read, and I like the repetition of the first line at the end of each stanza. That works well, and gives emphasis.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
|
Very nice! I enjoyed this one. Did you mean to repeat the first stanza in the second last? Also the font appears to have inconsistent size. Otherwise a very enjoyable read, and I like the repetition of the first line at the end of each stanza. That works well, and gives emphasis.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
-
Wendy, no I had reordered the stanzas with my final draft and forgot to delete one, thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading about the soul. I believe it never dies. I like the AaaA rhyme, it gives a nice rhythm.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
|
I enjoyed reading about the soul. I believe it never dies. I like the AaaA rhyme, it gives a nice rhythm.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
-
Thank you!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jim, loved this poem and it said it all for me. I'm a prose writer through and through. I don't know the first thing about meter and I don't much care either. I'll go with what I Iike, and I liked your poem very much. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
|
Hi Jim, loved this poem and it said it all for me. I'm a prose writer through and through. I don't know the first thing about meter and I don't much care either. I'll go with what I Iike, and I liked your poem very much. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
-
Ulla, thank you from the bottom of my heart!