Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story and storyline! This captivated my attention throughout the piece and I thoroughly enjoyed reading!
Thanxxxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023

Thanks kindly Melodie.
For you time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Melodie Michelle on 16-May-2023

;-)

reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

Yes as it is now pleading. (comma after 'yes')

I'll try the best I can Chaz. (comma after 'can')

I'll do the best I can Amanda. (comma after 'can')

Albie was my only daughter. (Who is Albie?)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023

Ae
y was one of our former writers Liberty Justicedaughter

Comment from Evelyn Hopkins

Good

This poem from your book is beautiful. I love the poetic form and the image chosen to go with this. I also really admire you giving thanks to Heavenly Father and Jesus Christ! Have a good day! :)

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023

I look at poetry as more of an art than a writing ability.
We are creating with our imagination not with words.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 7 1035
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"