Have Fun
Change of season6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun post as you are entering the winter phase in this poem and we are in summer over here! Ha ha ha, fun is the snow seems to be targetted at children, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
  |
A fun post as you are entering the winter phase in this poem and we are in summer over here! Ha ha ha, fun is the snow seems to be targetted at children, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
-
Thank you
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very good rhyming 15 syllable verse with fun image conveying this wonderful sense of childhood (and adult) enjoyment once the snow begins. Not sure I want to think about that coldness right now but the theme is well done in accurate syllable count. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
|
A very good rhyming 15 syllable verse with fun image conveying this wonderful sense of childhood (and adult) enjoyment once the snow begins. Not sure I want to think about that coldness right now but the theme is well done in accurate syllable count. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
-
Thank you
Comment from Lisasview
Cute image which tells your story very well..
Perfect 15 syllable count...
Easy flow and fun to read..............
The very best of luck in the contest.
Lisa, new to this site......................................
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
|
Cute image which tells your story very well..
Perfect 15 syllable count...
Easy flow and fun to read..............
The very best of luck in the contest.
Lisa, new to this site......................................
Comment Written 12-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
-
Thank you
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I feel cold already...! Your poem, though misplaced in time ( just joking, as I really hate winter!) conveys an undeniable atmosphere of a cold winter day. I also like the fact that you are mostly thinking of children - who truly delight in winter. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
|
I feel cold already...! Your poem, though misplaced in time ( just joking, as I really hate winter!) conveys an undeniable atmosphere of a cold winter day. I also like the fact that you are mostly thinking of children - who truly delight in winter. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
-
Thank you
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
We are in Spring here in the USA, but as far as Winter poems go, yours is excellent. I enjoyed the colorful words and the picture as well. it was a very good use of the syllables you had. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
|
We are in Spring here in the USA, but as far as Winter poems go, yours is excellent. I enjoyed the colorful words and the picture as well. it was a very good use of the syllables you had. Best wishes!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2023
-
Thank you
-
You're welcome.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Winter here, but we're far enough north that we won't have snow and even if we did it's doubtful I would think it 'fun'!
However, your wee poem does capture that sense of excitement in other climes at the first snowfall of the season. Nicely done.
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
|
Winter here, but we're far enough north that we won't have snow and even if we did it's doubtful I would think it 'fun'!
However, your wee poem does capture that sense of excitement in other climes at the first snowfall of the season. Nicely done.
Steve
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
-
Thank you Steve for generous and encouraging review. It is appreciated.
