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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I was always curious what animals might think as they watched humans. Now I have at least one opinion. LOL
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I was always curious what animals might think as they watched humans. Now I have at least one opinion. LOL
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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I think you Barbara and some animals have more of a conscience than a human being.
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Comment from Mia Twysted
I found this story to be very entertaining. I have read that we open the bananas wrong. It is the viewpoint that makes it. Seeing the animals talk about how they see things in their world that we invade.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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I found this story to be very entertaining. I have read that we open the bananas wrong. It is the viewpoint that makes it. Seeing the animals talk about how they see things in their world that we invade.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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I actually learned about bananas but not openings from a retired very old Air Force pilot 20 years ago.
What he taught me was that it's not an apple all day to keep the doctor away.
It's a banana a day that keeps the psychiatrist away!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a clever. The monkeys are smarter than the humans in this story. Looks like the panther will be enjoying a treat.
'Excellent observation about the banana. Yeah, why do most people open the banana from the stem end? I've even watch some people get a knife out to cut it so they don't smoosh the banana when they open it. It is much easier to open a banana from the small end and you don't damage the fruit inside.
Note: The only thing I can think of to make this better. You could leave of the dialog tags and this would read even smoother.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This is a clever. The monkeys are smarter than the humans in this story. Looks like the panther will be enjoying a treat.
'Excellent observation about the banana. Yeah, why do most people open the banana from the stem end? I've even watch some people get a knife out to cut it so they don't smoosh the banana when they open it. It is much easier to open a banana from the small end and you don't damage the fruit inside.
Note: The only thing I can think of to make this better. You could leave of the dialog tags and this would read even smoother.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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There will be another tomorrow.
Much more funny.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Stupid humans, indeed. Are they really a good dinner for panthers? Or just junk food? Like the old song says "look out for the man-sized bite". I guess the monkeys are wiser.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Stupid humans, indeed. Are they really a good dinner for panthers? Or just junk food? Like the old song says "look out for the man-sized bite". I guess the monkeys are wiser.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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More on this one later tomorrow.
And thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice story. Good work.
Bananas in their gullets!: - (just one punctuation)
"Doesn't it know yo open the small end?' - (you)
and wheres their rifles?" - (where's)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Very nice story. Good work.
Bananas in their gullets!: - (just one punctuation)
"Doesn't it know yo open the small end?' - (you)
and wheres their rifles?" - (where's)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Yeah, this needs a little grammar love.
I didn't have time to double check and edit.
I was on the bus and I had to get off.
Thanks Wayne.
Doctor Ricky 1024