The Aspen Grove Murders
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
A good line: " If looks could kill, I'd be dead." You always use metaphors effectively: " The magic bubble had burst--or so he'd thought." & "You're not these scars!" "He convinced himself this was goodbye," But is it? Nice ending
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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A good line: " If looks could kill, I'd be dead." You always use metaphors effectively: " The magic bubble had burst--or so he'd thought." & "You're not these scars!" "He convinced himself this was goodbye," But is it? Nice ending
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Liz dear, thank you so much for the wonderful review and for catching up with me. I'm glad you enjoyed it all. Sending along my very best to you all too, Sally XOs
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My pleasure
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
Your novel has everything... good and evil, angels and demons, a healing, a wedding, love stories, close calls, new beginnings, solving a cold case, family reunion, and the renowned blind detective coming to the rescue with her team.
Tommy and Willa's romantics are being followed by Simon and Candace now. But Sam Farnsworth is Fee's attorney, and what will he do? I sure hope that the Aspen Grove police keep him locked up... safe and sound behind bars. If he is able to escape, Simon is in deep trouble. Perhaps Candace and Daniel, too.
I have to wonder who Fee's "connections" are. I'm sure that there are men (and perhaps women) who need to be prosecuted as well. Just how many Tammys are there? How many are still alive somewhere? How many have been killed in their evil schemes? There are so many "missing persons" across the country these days... where are they?
Nicely penned! Looking forward to Chapter 25!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Hi Sally,
Your novel has everything... good and evil, angels and demons, a healing, a wedding, love stories, close calls, new beginnings, solving a cold case, family reunion, and the renowned blind detective coming to the rescue with her team.
Tommy and Willa's romantics are being followed by Simon and Candace now. But Sam Farnsworth is Fee's attorney, and what will he do? I sure hope that the Aspen Grove police keep him locked up... safe and sound behind bars. If he is able to escape, Simon is in deep trouble. Perhaps Candace and Daniel, too.
I have to wonder who Fee's "connections" are. I'm sure that there are men (and perhaps women) who need to be prosecuted as well. Just how many Tammys are there? How many are still alive somewhere? How many have been killed in their evil schemes? There are so many "missing persons" across the country these days... where are they?
Nicely penned! Looking forward to Chapter 25!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 08-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Aw, thank you, Kim! Wow, such a wonderful surprise to see you on Monday! I?m so glad you enjoyed it all. Tammy Perez and Tammy Sue Vance are the same person. That is one of the reasons why the blind detective is in Aspen Grove. The sleuthing cold case detective tracked her down. Tammy called home on special occasions but never said anything. The calls were traced to pay phones in the Aspen Grove area. This clue is a few chapters back. Thank you, again. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
I'm glad to be caught up! I hate it when I miss a chapter. I'm happy that Simon and Candace have declared their love. I always thought that they belonged together. Fee is up to no-good, I can tell, because he's still alive! I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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I'm glad to be caught up! I hate it when I miss a chapter. I'm happy that Simon and Candace have declared their love. I always thought that they belonged together. Fee is up to no-good, I can tell, because he's still alive! I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Dear Mary, thank you so much for catching up with me and I'm so glad you enjoyed the book chapter. You assess it very well. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great chapter you have penned. I sat glued to my seat at the table as I read this. I am hoping they do get married and far away from the evil ones! Very good descriptive words and great dialogue also. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This is a really great chapter you have penned. I sat glued to my seat at the table as I read this. I am hoping they do get married and far away from the evil ones! Very good descriptive words and great dialogue also. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Teri! It is most needed and appreciated.
Sending along my very best to you all,
Sal XOs
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I wish I had a six to give you! You are a great writer!!!
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Thank you, Teri! That is so kind of you! XOs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
That was a lovely scene between Simon and Candace, two very hurt people finding love and peace with each other, even though there is still a threat to them both. Beautifully done, Sally, another good chapter.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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That was a lovely scene between Simon and Candace, two very hurt people finding love and peace with each other, even though there is still a threat to them both. Beautifully done, Sally, another good chapter.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my book chapter. It is both needed and appreciated. Blessings back to you and yours, dear Valda. Sal XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
Awww, that was so sweet. I'm sure Candace would have known all along that Simon was in love with her. How could she not? When someone stays in a situation like that for you, you know it.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Awww, that was so sweet. I'm sure Candace would have known all along that Simon was in love with her. How could she not? When someone stays in a situation like that for you, you know it.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments. So glad you enjoyed my latest book chapter. Blessings back to you and yours, Sally XOs
Comment from Carol Clark2
A lovely romance scene! The dialogue is great between Candace and Simon. I do hope they will both stay safe and out of Fee's clutches. Looking forward to the rest of your book. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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A lovely romance scene! The dialogue is great between Candace and Simon. I do hope they will both stay safe and out of Fee's clutches. Looking forward to the rest of your book. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Carol dear,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter and for the generous stars! I am blessed and honored. Thank you so much for thinking of me and for blessing me with the extra star!
Blessings back to you and yours too. Sally XOs
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The romance was a nice break from all the difficulties and Fee's evil.
Comment from BethShelby
This was a sweet chapter. It was good to see Simon learn that his life was not the way he saw it. Candice loved him. You have written a beautiful bit of true love into you story. With all the bad things there are those who are finding true happiness.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This was a sweet chapter. It was good to see Simon learn that his life was not the way he saw it. Candice loved him. You have written a beautiful bit of true love into you story. With all the bad things there are those who are finding true happiness.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it. I have more to go and I?m so glad you?re staying on. Sending along my very best, Sal XOs
Comment from Sankey
What a beautiful chapter. I am hoping his father (Simon's) or his father's minions will not get to him.
Just one tiny spag. Afterwards, he hurried [to] up to the next level
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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What a beautiful chapter. I am hoping his father (Simon's) or his father's minions will not get to him.
Just one tiny spag. Afterwards, he hurried [to] up to the next level
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Dear Geoff, thank you so much for the lovely review and generous stars. Both means so much to me. I?m so glad you?re enjoying the chapter. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally XOs
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Sal, this was terribly romantic, of course, and we all love romance:-) But the entire time I was reading it I was waiting for something bad to happen. I know Fee has something up his sleeve, I just hope it doesn't mean exacting some terrible revenge against Simon!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
In the paragraph, "Afterwards, he hurried to up to the next level . . ." Take out one "to"
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Sal, this was terribly romantic, of course, and we all love romance:-) But the entire time I was reading it I was waiting for something bad to happen. I know Fee has something up his sleeve, I just hope it doesn't mean exacting some terrible revenge against Simon!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
In the paragraph, "Afterwards, he hurried to up to the next level . . ." Take out one "to"
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind critique. Yes, I saw that this morning and I just got to it now. Thank you! Sometimes my voice text just rambles on. Thanks again, dear Pam. Blessings for your week, Sal XOs
