Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Steel up your heart against decrepit crypt mummies.

This is a sad story . Seems to me there was a reason she was homeless.

Stay sharp, Doc! Bad people prowl.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

I know you write about them. Nasty, elves and goblins all the time!
One definitely is not an elf since she's about 280 lb.
But when it comes to it being a goblin of course it wants as much as it can feed its fat water pig face!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story! Interesting plot! Very well thought out storyline. It kept me wondering to see what happens next!

Thanxxxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family this year!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Thanks Melodie.
And, I really appreciate your review and blessing!
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Comment from Brandon Clark

Excellent

Another great work with a very important and poignant message. There were zero issues I picked up and it read smoothly!

Great Job! Hope you're well
Brandon

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Why? Thanks for your review Brandon, and also your concerns.
I'm working on my next piece called, "Resilience"
And that will be the answer to your question.
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