"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from royowen
Sometimes I like to write a "letter from the grave" so to speak, knowing what the departed people are in cinque with their beliefs and goals, and the wonderful thing is, I know they are, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
Sometimes I like to write a "letter from the grave" so to speak, knowing what the departed people are in cinque with their beliefs and goals, and the wonderful thing is, I know they are, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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About one out of every 300 writings.
I give my son credit from above.
All my inspiration and all my work comes from up there and him.
And I get it through Heavenly Father through my son.
But the question is why am I so blessed and why am I so cursed?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mia Twysted
It is like a prayer to the beyond. To someone, you love and lost. I believe those we lost are looking out for us somehow. We are all connected.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
It is like a prayer to the beyond. To someone, you love and lost. I believe those we lost are looking out for us somehow. We are all connected.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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I think you Mia and you gave me a good idea!
Yes, so read my next piece and tell me what you think?
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You have written a very sad poem. I'm not sure who you are saying goodbye to but it sounds like it is not good. The image displays a girl wiping a tear from her cheek. Is it farewell?
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
You have written a very sad poem. I'm not sure who you are saying goodbye to but it sounds like it is not good. The image displays a girl wiping a tear from her cheek. Is it farewell?
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thanks for your time and review.
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Comment from Evelyn Hopkins
Thank you for sharing this amazing story! It has a lot of depth and really makes you think about what life is and what matters. Hope you have a good day! And good luck to you in your future
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
Thank you for sharing this amazing story! It has a lot of depth and really makes you think about what life is and what matters. Hope you have a good day! And good luck to you in your future
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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About every 500 poems I do exactly what you just read.
I write my son's name as he exists above and also below in other people's bodies.
Why do I need to do these things?
And, thanks for stopping by.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
This is very beautiful, my friend. You have a great grasp on thought patterns and poignant wording.
I do enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing your viewpoints, knowledge, and emotions with us.
D
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
This is very beautiful, my friend. You have a great grasp on thought patterns and poignant wording.
I do enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing your viewpoints, knowledge, and emotions with us.
D
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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Thanks Douglass.
About every 3 to 400 poetry poems I create.
I do exactly similar to this and at first, not intentional.
But as I feel the spirit and the Beauty of it.
I give him full credit which he deserves.
Yes, since it's coming from him above.
He likes your six stars.
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Comment from Ben Colder
A very sad Fairwell. You spoke the truth concerning the Father and Jesus His son. They are our way to exist in a life beyond out thoughts. Thanks for the nice post.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
A very sad Fairwell. You spoke the truth concerning the Father and Jesus His son. They are our way to exist in a life beyond out thoughts. Thanks for the nice post.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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Thanks for your time and review Ben and have a great day!
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
I Loved Thee do and this you now always need to know. (Thee so???)
"And, rhe Beat Goes On!" (comma not needed after 'And' & 'the')
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
Again, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
I Loved Thee do and this you now always need to know. (Thee so???)
"And, rhe Beat Goes On!" (comma not needed after 'And' & 'the')
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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Thanks again this is what I call a one out of 500 milestone.
When I get full credit for the writing to my son who lives above and in others below.
Doctor Ricky