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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from royowen
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Sometimes I like to write a "letter from the grave" so to speak, knowing what the departed people are in cinque with their beliefs and goals, and the wonderful thing is, I know they are, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
    About one out of every 300 writings.
    I give my son credit from above.
    All my inspiration and all my work comes from up there and him.
    And I get it through Heavenly Father through my son.
    But the question is why am I so blessed and why am I so cursed?
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mia Twysted
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It is like a prayer to the beyond. To someone, you love and lost. I believe those we lost are looking out for us somehow. We are all connected.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
    I think you Mia and you gave me a good idea!
    Yes, so read my next piece and tell me what you think?
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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You have written a very sad poem. I'm not sure who you are saying goodbye to but it sounds like it is not good. The image displays a girl wiping a tear from her cheek. Is it farewell?

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your time and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Evelyn Hopkins
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Thank you for sharing this amazing story! It has a lot of depth and really makes you think about what life is and what matters. Hope you have a good day! And good luck to you in your future

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    About every 500 poems I do exactly what you just read.
    I write my son's name as he exists above and also below in other people's bodies.
    Why do I need to do these things?
    And, thanks for stopping by.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is very beautiful, my friend. You have a great grasp on thought patterns and poignant wording.

I do enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing your viewpoints, knowledge, and emotions with us.
D

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks Douglass.
    About every 3 to 400 poetry poems I create.
    I do exactly similar to this and at first, not intentional.
    But as I feel the spirit and the Beauty of it.
    I give him full credit which he deserves.
    Yes, since it's coming from him above.
    He likes your six stars.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Ben Colder
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A very sad Fairwell. You spoke the truth concerning the Father and Jesus His son. They are our way to exist in a life beyond out thoughts. Thanks for the nice post.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks for your time and review Ben and have a great day!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Again, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

I Loved Thee do and this you now always need to know. (Thee so???)

"And, rhe Beat Goes On!" (comma not needed after 'And' & 'the')

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thanks again this is what I call a one out of 500 milestone.
    When I get full credit for the writing to my son who lives above and in others below.
    Doctor Ricky