Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Like the whole tone of the story. It makes me think about space and the darkness above differently. The short story is filled with metaphors which makes it more mysterious.
Nice job

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

I shall release another chapter of this romance sometime today.
And thanks for reviewing it Mario.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and Hos Only Son Jesus Christ. (I made it to the very end before I found a problem, 'His Only Son...)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thanks.
I've been writing a lot of chapters especially in a nightclub in Atlantic City called Nola's.
I decided to kind of like mix a book into a book.
There will be of course star poetry but also a storyline between these two lovers.
You will see the desperation progress in the next six chapters.
Yes, until I get to the final conclusion.
(which is all been written)
And, thanks Barbara for that one grammar issue.
Doctor Ricky