Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Snakely and Spidie Help"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
8 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is very cute, nice, and I actually found myself quite captivated by the story line even though you were probably aiming for kids.
I guess that shows where my maturity falls.
Good job here, my friend. You have a nice brain. (Good luck during zombie apocalypse!)
D
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This is very cute, nice, and I actually found myself quite captivated by the story line even though you were probably aiming for kids.
I guess that shows where my maturity falls.
Good job here, my friend. You have a nice brain. (Good luck during zombie apocalypse!)
D
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.It is good to entertain the child within.This series is for all ages.
Comment from Ricky1024
This rescue plan between your three main characters.
Yes, was very wonderfully written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Hopefully this will work out in the end for the poor captured pup.
Thank you for sharing this and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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This rescue plan between your three main characters.
Yes, was very wonderfully written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Hopefully this will work out in the end for the poor captured pup.
Thank you for sharing this and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Awesome story! The words are all right in describing things, a good thought out story and thank you for sharing!
Thanks and may God bless you and your family!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Awesome story! The words are all right in describing things, a good thought out story and thank you for sharing!
Thanks and may God bless you and your family!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to check out the previous chapters, feel free. There are no reviews needed...just enjoy.
Comment from royowen
I love this, the antagonists come up against a wily snake, they are trying to steal away a lovely dog, but they are thwarted by these three protagonists, I'm not sure what Spidie is, a spider? And Bea? A girl? Well done Liz, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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I love this, the antagonists come up against a wily snake, they are trying to steal away a lovely dog, but they are thwarted by these three protagonists, I'm not sure what Spidie is, a spider? And Bea? A girl? Well done Liz, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Bea ia a bear. She named herself that as a little bear when her mom was writing her name so she could see what her name would look lke & dropped a drop of honey on the R so printed BEA. Spidie is what Bea named the spider. This is an autobiographical allegory. You know Bea...you know me lol
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Pleased to meet you Liz, and for explaining who Bea is
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Smile..Bea is also pleased to meet you
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Bless you
Comment from lyenochka
What I appreciated most about this post was that Bea realized the need to work with her friends as a team to help others. Too often we want to help and don't get all the information and it becomes less helpful. That she had a team and did the proper intel first with Snakely's intel and Spidey's web trap, made this more helpful to all.
I still wished for more dialogue as the friends were planning.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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What I appreciated most about this post was that Bea realized the need to work with her friends as a team to help others. Too often we want to help and don't get all the information and it becomes less helpful. That she had a team and did the proper intel first with Snakely's intel and Spidey's web trap, made this more helpful to all.
I still wished for more dialogue as the friends were planning.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this tale with us. All children need to learn to plan together and work as a team. It's hard for them to do and this short story perfectly describes it. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for sharing this tale with us. All children need to learn to plan together and work as a team. It's hard for them to do and this short story perfectly describes it. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This was a sweet review. Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying Bea & company.
Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea, Spidie and Snakely definitely had a plan, which was a good one to save Lady. This was great. They would save Lady because they decided to do so. The gentleman with the van was a blind as a bat, his glasses meant everything to him. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. Bea, Spidie and Snakely definitely had a plan, which was a good one to save Lady. This was great. They would save Lady because they decided to do so. The gentleman with the van was a blind as a bat, his glasses meant everything to him. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This was a sweet review. Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying Bea & company.
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It is delightful, most welcome, Liz.
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***Hugs***
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a wonderfully vivid tale of rescue and heroics by some colourful characters. Children as well as adults will enjoy this. Descriptions are superb: the tangling of Spidey's web and the gumming up of the kidnapper's glasses were my favourite and the whole 'attack' reminded me of something from Home Alone. Perfectly crafted piece of fiction. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This is a wonderfully vivid tale of rescue and heroics by some colourful characters. Children as well as adults will enjoy this. Descriptions are superb: the tangling of Spidey's web and the gumming up of the kidnapper's glasses were my favourite and the whole 'attack' reminded me of something from Home Alone. Perfectly crafted piece of fiction. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This was a sweet review. Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying Bea & company.
