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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Mermaids and Guinea Pigs"For judiverse for the loss of her husband
15 total reviews
Comment from Lorinda lee Boyer
This is great! What a creative idea this bringing together the mermaids and guinea pigs! I love it. And the picture is so gorgeous. I can just imagine the little guinea pigs waiting for treats, too. This is so clever.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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This is great! What a creative idea this bringing together the mermaids and guinea pigs! I love it. And the picture is so gorgeous. I can just imagine the little guinea pigs waiting for treats, too. This is so clever.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is such a sweet fantasy with the talking little guinea pigs and the mermaids meeting. The ending leaves what is going to happen a bit up in the air. Perhaps the two species enjoy time together. Or the darker meaning is that the guinea pigs can't live under the water, but the mermaids mistakenly think they can.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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This is such a sweet fantasy with the talking little guinea pigs and the mermaids meeting. The ending leaves what is going to happen a bit up in the air. Perhaps the two species enjoy time together. Or the darker meaning is that the guinea pigs can't live under the water, but the mermaids mistakenly think they can.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual spiritual fantasy poem about mermaids and guinea pigs for Judi and I am certain she will find this write amusing and also soothing, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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An unusual spiritual fantasy poem about mermaids and guinea pigs for Judi and I am certain she will find this write amusing and also soothing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Judy did enjoy the poem. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi mermaids, this is a very
charming and whimsical
poem. Guinea pigs and
mermaids, it speaks much
cuteness. The artwork is
pretty. I hope you have a
pleasant evening. -
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Hi mermaids, this is a very
charming and whimsical
poem. Guinea pigs and
mermaids, it speaks much
cuteness. The artwork is
pretty. I hope you have a
pleasant evening. -
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you for taking time to read and enjoy. Elaine
Comment from Ricky1024
Cute and great imagination.
Well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Cute and great imagination.
Well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you, Doctor. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
Thanks so much for leaving these comforting words. How unusual to see the guinea pigs looking at the mermaids. Great comments about the spirits of the air, those who have passed on, laugh, fly free, enjoy the scene. Such a positive thought to hold onto. judi
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thanks so much for leaving these comforting words. How unusual to see the guinea pigs looking at the mermaids. Great comments about the spirits of the air, those who have passed on, laugh, fly free, enjoy the scene. Such a positive thought to hold onto. judi
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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I thought this would be a comforting poem for you. Nothing like guinea pigs and mermaids to life one's spirit. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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You're welcome. I believe in mermaids. judi
Comment from shelley kaye
mermaids and rodents is a interesting little group lol
this was a well-written and thought-provoking poem yet fun at the same time with imagistic word choices and smooth flow
one suggestion i have is maybe try blue background and a white font to blend in with the cool picture? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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mermaids and rodents is a interesting little group lol
this was a well-written and thought-provoking poem yet fun at the same time with imagistic word choices and smooth flow
one suggestion i have is maybe try blue background and a white font to blend in with the cool picture? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you so much. Great suggestion. Elaine
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely fun-filled verse with wonderful images of "squeaking fur balls" "potato-like creatures" and "Hooman fish." The last lines are also skilful and rich in meaning. This post would bring a smile to any reader and hopefully will do the same for Judi. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Debbie
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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A lovely fun-filled verse with wonderful images of "squeaking fur balls" "potato-like creatures" and "Hooman fish." The last lines are also skilful and rich in meaning. This post would bring a smile to any reader and hopefully will do the same for Judi. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Love your words. Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Sanku
This is a lovely poem to cheer up Judi. The imagery of mermaids and the guinea pigs frollicking in water is very joyful .i liked the expression 'human fish'.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely poem to cheer up Judi. The imagery of mermaids and the guinea pigs frollicking in water is very joyful .i liked the expression 'human fish'.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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That is exactly the point of my poem, a little fun to cheer up Judie. Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
A great way to cheer her up. Made me smile as well. Maybe they look like miniature otters. What a scene. Mermaids and guinea pigs. I know you love your guinea pig family. Most enjoyable and glad you are writing. K xx
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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A great way to cheer her up. Made me smile as well. Maybe they look like miniature otters. What a scene. Mermaids and guinea pigs. I know you love your guinea pig family. Most enjoyable and glad you are writing. K xx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Yes, I thought a combination of guinea pigs and mermaids would be a good cheerer upper. Judi always enjoys my poems about guinea pigs and mermaids. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
