Thinking of judiverse
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Dear Judi"For judiverse for the loss of her husband
39 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Sandra your words of consolation of Judi's loss show deep feeling for her. This could be used for anyone's los of husband by changing Duck to the new name.
The poem flows smoothly and there are no forced rhymes.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Sandra your words of consolation of Judi's loss show deep feeling for her. This could be used for anyone's los of husband by changing Duck to the new name.
The poem flows smoothly and there are no forced rhymes.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Joan. That is so nice of you. I wouldn't mind if anyone who has lost a loved one used my poem. Sadness and grief is so painful, it cuts at our hearts and it takes a while to move past that point. Thank you for that gold star, my friend. I appreciate you a lot. Have a lovely weekend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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You?re welcome for both the review and the star. Enjoy the weekend.
Joan
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You?re welcome for both the review and the star. Enjoy the weekend.
Joan
Comment from dmt1967
I am so sorry for her loss and think this poem is a wonderful tribute to both of them. I love the picture and the elegant yellow background. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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I am so sorry for her loss and think this poem is a wonderful tribute to both of them. I love the picture and the elegant yellow background. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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It was such a shock to learn Dick had died, it wasn't expected when he went into hospital. Thank you for reading my small part in helping her through this. I'm glad you liked it. Lots of love, Sandra xx
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a beautiful poem of comfort that you have written to encourage Judi at this time. These lines are so true:
"But God did listen, He was there, He stood right by your side
He cried with you, He knew your pain, His love is oceans wide."
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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This is a beautiful poem of comfort that you have written to encourage Judi at this time. These lines are so true:
"But God did listen, He was there, He stood right by your side
He cried with you, He knew your pain, His love is oceans wide."
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Anne, I'm glad you think it will help. It is hard to get your life back together when you lose your partner, but she will. Thank you for that golden star, that was really kind of you. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
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You are welcome. Yes, it is hard to lose a spouse, but God gives comfort and strength.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Once again, I am touched how sensitive and aware you are about people's gains and losses. This is important because it isan opportunity for us to pray, sending healing and condolences for those in need. Thank you
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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Once again, I am touched how sensitive and aware you are about people's gains and losses. This is important because it isan opportunity for us to pray, sending healing and condolences for those in need. Thank you
Comment Written 23-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading this poem, Liz. It would prefer not to have written it and Judi had been able to take her dear hubby home again. Thanks, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx
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***Sigh***
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always nice when kindhearted people step up and offer a few words of encouragement to our Fanstory friends who are suffering the pains of losing loved ones. This life is just preparing for the next one and although Dick has gone on first, I'm sure he'll be waiting with arms open wide for Judi to arrive. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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It's always nice when kindhearted people step up and offer a few words of encouragement to our Fanstory friends who are suffering the pains of losing loved ones. This life is just preparing for the next one and although Dick has gone on first, I'm sure he'll be waiting with arms open wide for Judi to arrive. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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We are a family, aren't we? I've had so much kindness from people here, and it's nice to be able to do something back. Thanks, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Sanku
This is a very touching poem for Judi. This is the time she would need lot of solace .Your first stanza so realistic I remember when I lost my father just two weeks before my wedding, this is exactly what I thought .How can everything looks so normal ?
I am sure Judi will find it comforting.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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This is a very touching poem for Judi. This is the time she would need lot of solace .Your first stanza so realistic I remember when I lost my father just two weeks before my wedding, this is exactly what I thought .How can everything looks so normal ?
I am sure Judi will find it comforting.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Sanku, that is so nice of you. I'm sorry you lost your father so near your wedding. That must have been a tough one not to have him there walking you down the aisle. I hope this does help Judi, to know many of us understand what she is feeling. Thanks so much, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra. xx
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for Judi. Sorry for the loss of her husband. So so sad. I can relate just lost my brother in February. Beautiful photo to compliment yourwords.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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This is a beautifully written poem for Judi. Sorry for the loss of her husband. So so sad. I can relate just lost my brother in February. Beautiful photo to compliment yourwords.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Joanne, I'm pleased you liked my poem for Judi. Such a sad time for here. Warm hugs Sandra xx
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Your welcome
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the book. Thinking of judiverse.
I have read many chapters. It's such a great idea... very kind.
Good rhyme and meter that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Wonderful entry for the book. Thinking of judiverse.
I have read many chapters. It's such a great idea... very kind.
Good rhyme and meter that doesn't sound forced. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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I love that quote by Atticus, Gypsy, what he said is true. Thank you for reading my poem for Judi, I'm hoping as the days and months ahead go by these poems will bring her some comfort. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sure she will appreciate these sentiments and thoughts well contained in this cheery poem, though the occasion may not be.
It is times like these one needs all the support they can muster.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Sure she will appreciate these sentiments and thoughts well contained in this cheery poem, though the occasion may not be.
It is times like these one needs all the support they can muster.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Brett. You're right, at times like this she'll need it for quite a long time. Sandra xx
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a lovely poem and note of support, Sandra, for Judi as she deals with this huge loss. Your personalization of this terrific verse will her throughout her remainder here. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely poem and note of support, Sandra, for Judi as she deals with this huge loss. Your personalization of this terrific verse will her throughout her remainder here. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you, for reading and the golden star, Bill. That is the the only thing that keeps us going at times, that we will be together again. Your review is so nice, thank you. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
