Comment from chocoletdrop052

Excellent

Yes, losing touch with the flow of that river, will only leave you hungering for a light shower or just a splash to make sure your alive. Thank you for the memories. Well penned

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thanks for your wonderful review.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Of course, I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.

The River of Love is available to both me and to you. (The other person should always come first, both you and me. I'm not sure if this was intentional or not.)

For. it's available to all. (not sure why the comma is after 'For')

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thanks again for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This one flowed so much better, Ricky, with lovely, dreamy imagery that absorbed the reader. I still don't understand some of the capitals you use but the whole post is generally well crafted and presented. Well done, Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thanks and what you "Need" to understand.
Tis that we are all artists and our works are individual as different.
I never rate less than Five Stars.
We are not Grammar or English teachers but striving poets.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 20-Apr-2023

I think your first sentence is aggressively said and deserves an apology. I put a lot of work in reviewing and aim to be fair. That's why I changed your previous star rating to 5 but I won't be bullied!

reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Sorry you feel that way.
But you need to realize that I have seen this hurt a young writer here, who was going to college and writing a book about Wolves.
And, because the person was taking stars away for her grammar issues.
(Reviewers name withheld)
And, writing friend country ranch writer Has taken over writing here for her husband who passed away.
And, her grammar is atrocious.
And I never say a word about it because her vision is fadinb.
And I always give her 5 and 6 star reviews.
Note: We are not here to be English teacher's we been there already.
And, we're not here to chastise anybody.
Because they don't have the proper grammar ability to present their beautiful work.
Note: When it comes to my works here a and ratings?
I know my value and no change in your review to me Debbie is necessary.
Didn't mean to upset you.
Just protecting the site writers.
Tom Enis tries but falls short.
He goes to write on Fanstory.
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023