Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is such a beautiful and well written, heartfelt poem you have penned for Judi. You used really great loving words and great video to go with the words and imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2023

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

This is so beautiful, and I appreciate you so much for writing this. It is elegantly worded and the rhyme is lovely. "A promise kept" is especially meaningful. Your thoughts and prayers have meant so much to me throughout it all. judi

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

THANK YOU, Judi, for your
beautiful review.
Take carem, Jan

reply by judiverse on 24-Apr-2023

Thanks so much for the beautiful poem you contributed. I deeply appreciate it. judi

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, A Promise Kept, presented with four AABB-rhymed quatrains, brings us to that fateful time when the world fades away and the heavens open wide. Nice.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thank you, Bill, for your great interpretation
of my poem.
Means much to me, Jan

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Beautifully said Jan. A lovely chapter in the book for Judi. When they are so sick, we need to let them go on their final journey. A lovely heartfelt presentation.
valda

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thank you, Pearl, for you great review.
Means much to me, Jan

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is is lovely poem and the song you shared is also beautiful. I was so sorry to learn of Judi losing her husband over the weekend. I'm glad you are doing a book of memories for her.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thank you, Beth, for your great review.
Means a lot to me, Jan

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello Jan,
Thank you so much for this lovely poem in support of Judi. The Fan Story family is so compassionate, and they have lent their talent to comfort a fellow member. Everything about this poem was a delight to the senses.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thank you, Tom, for your great review
and comments.
Both mean much to me, Jan

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

It is all so very important for us to remember that when we make a promise to somebody that we fulfill that promise and keep it. Nothing destroyed our relationship quicker and making a promise and not keeping it. Patricia.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you, Patricia, for dropping by to
read and review my presentation.
Both mean much to me, Jan

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Oh, Jan. My eyes are brimming even as my heart swells for this absolutely stunning poem of comfort and love, and faith that you offer to Judi. When I heard the strains of "Ave Maria" I reached for my tissues! Every line is exquisite, your repeating lines are like gems. So deserving of the sixes I am "forever it seems) out of too soon...

These lines were especially poignant:

"No need to fear, so come with me,
His love you've known has set you free.
His glory lives, He's always near,
so come with me, no need to fear."

Of all I have read, I am certain Judi will find your offering especially soothing.

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you, karenina, for your AWESOME review.
I appreciate your words which were straight from
your heart.
This is a special review and means much to me, Jan

reply by karenina on 20-Apr-2023

I can't touch the hem of your reviews....but I tried!

(smile)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

The perfect song and music for a perfect marriage that lasted sixty years. This faith-based poem with thoughts to guide Judy through this tough time.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you, spitfire, for your
detailed review.
Means much to me, Jn

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh Jan, how lovely and sacred this is for Judi's book. I'm sure it has blessed her so. Beautifully written and illustrated in this form. The video is extra special. Sending you my very best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you, Sally, for dropping by with
a great review and comments.
Both are special, Jan