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Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Wendy,
I enjoyed your story. I thought you were writing about a woman, of course. But, turns out, it was a guitar gathering dust, still capable of beautiful music... but overlooked. As a musician, I can appreciate this. Some people have money to spare, always looking for new guitars... sometimes new, sometimes old. But me? I never had the money to buy a really good quality guitar... yet! I'd love to have a top-of-the-line Martin, Taylor, Gibson or Gretsch.
I've played guitar since the Beatles invaded America. In my late teens and early 20's, I switched to Gordon Lightfoot songs. I'm self-taught.
My first guitar was an electric Kent solid body... a beautiful gold guitar, but not great quality. I soon traded it in for an acoustic Eko 12-string guitar. I wish I still had it, but my little brother dropped it down the stairs. Made in Italy, a bit on the heavy side, but much better quality than the Kent. In 1983, when I was 32 years old, I bought a Yamaha. Not a bad guitar, I kept it for many years. Eventually, my brother painted a really nice scene on it. Peter was a very talented artist. I still have the guitar, and use it sometimes in the Worship team at church. A few years ago, my wife bought me a Takamine. I use it the most these days. It's an electric/acoustic with a built in tuner. That's what Glenn Frey of The Eagles used. (Glenn died in 2016.) And finally, my youngest son bought me a Washburn 12-string a couple of years ago. It stays in tune very well for the tension of so many strings. So over 77 years, I've only had 5 guitars, and still have 3 of them.
You did very well writing the biography of this poor guitar that found new life. Just shows to go ya... everyone likes to be appreciated!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Hi Wendy,
I enjoyed your story. I thought you were writing about a woman, of course. But, turns out, it was a guitar gathering dust, still capable of beautiful music... but overlooked. As a musician, I can appreciate this. Some people have money to spare, always looking for new guitars... sometimes new, sometimes old. But me? I never had the money to buy a really good quality guitar... yet! I'd love to have a top-of-the-line Martin, Taylor, Gibson or Gretsch.
I've played guitar since the Beatles invaded America. In my late teens and early 20's, I switched to Gordon Lightfoot songs. I'm self-taught.
My first guitar was an electric Kent solid body... a beautiful gold guitar, but not great quality. I soon traded it in for an acoustic Eko 12-string guitar. I wish I still had it, but my little brother dropped it down the stairs. Made in Italy, a bit on the heavy side, but much better quality than the Kent. In 1983, when I was 32 years old, I bought a Yamaha. Not a bad guitar, I kept it for many years. Eventually, my brother painted a really nice scene on it. Peter was a very talented artist. I still have the guitar, and use it sometimes in the Worship team at church. A few years ago, my wife bought me a Takamine. I use it the most these days. It's an electric/acoustic with a built in tuner. That's what Glenn Frey of The Eagles used. (Glenn died in 2016.) And finally, my youngest son bought me a Washburn 12-string a couple of years ago. It stays in tune very well for the tension of so many strings. So over 77 years, I've only had 5 guitars, and still have 3 of them.
You did very well writing the biography of this poor guitar that found new life. Just shows to go ya... everyone likes to be appreciated!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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It amazes me how many writers are also musicians and painters. Yet it?s not really surprising considering the creative side of the brain must be being used constantly. Thanks for your very nice response. I see more of who you are and getting to know you better is a delight.
Wendy
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Oh, Wendy, you're so kind!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Wendy, I love how you can write such an interesting story and keep us in suspense until the very last paragraph. I was trying to figure out where you were going on this --but never suspected it would be a guitar. Very well done
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Wendy, I love how you can write such an interesting story and keep us in suspense until the very last paragraph. I was trying to figure out where you were going on this --but never suspected it would be a guitar. Very well done
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much Anne. Absolutely no one imagined a guitar! Lol. I appreciate your review!
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a cute and entertaining story. The entire time I read, I thought it was a dog talking...being left alone to grieve silently, missing a gentle touch, and feeling unwanted. I never expected, "I'm going to be his new guitar." Haha! Great storytelling.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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This is a cute and entertaining story. The entire time I read, I thought it was a dog talking...being left alone to grieve silently, missing a gentle touch, and feeling unwanted. I never expected, "I'm going to be his new guitar." Haha! Great storytelling.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Haha! That's good. I am glad I tricked you! Thanks for a super review!
Wendy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I never guessed guitar, I was thinking the pot plant, but that's the gardener in me. Very cleverly written Wendy, and an amusing finish. I hope I'm not the only one who didn't guess, LOL
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I never guessed guitar, I was thinking the pot plant, but that's the gardener in me. Very cleverly written Wendy, and an amusing finish. I hope I'm not the only one who didn't guess, LOL
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Lol. Thank you Valda. A pot plant would have also fitted quite well. In fact no-one at all realised it was a guitar! (and I was the bad guy who neglected it.) Thanks so much for a super review. Always appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Wendy,
very creative to hook a reader in with this ambiguous piece of writing... especially when the protagonist seemed so available. Well, and when I read how shapely and admired they were... and the hot scene with his touch, ah, the embracing, but to feel unwanted, yeah that stung! So my emotions went up and down...smile(((((((.
So, fast forward to why no gender came into the story... shoulda' wised up earlier... but I'm a romantic... I love a great ending, an enjoyable ending. So, I guess I got the right finish... this beauty's going to someone who appreciates the curves, the tone, the long neck... yes, a melody made in heaven.
I enjoyed reading this quirky little story Wendy... thank you for posting this... and yes, your notes may have a tad of familiar? As I now run in to pick up my beauty, caress her, tell her I still love her even though I haven't stroked her for the longest time. I'll be more in tune to her feelings tomorrow... I promise!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of music.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Hi Wendy,
very creative to hook a reader in with this ambiguous piece of writing... especially when the protagonist seemed so available. Well, and when I read how shapely and admired they were... and the hot scene with his touch, ah, the embracing, but to feel unwanted, yeah that stung! So my emotions went up and down...smile(((((((.
So, fast forward to why no gender came into the story... shoulda' wised up earlier... but I'm a romantic... I love a great ending, an enjoyable ending. So, I guess I got the right finish... this beauty's going to someone who appreciates the curves, the tone, the long neck... yes, a melody made in heaven.
I enjoyed reading this quirky little story Wendy... thank you for posting this... and yes, your notes may have a tad of familiar? As I now run in to pick up my beauty, caress her, tell her I still love her even though I haven't stroked her for the longest time. I'll be more in tune to her feelings tomorrow... I promise!
With our thoughts we create...
the magic of music.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Lol. If you are referring to your wife, just don't tell her that a story about a guitar reminded you to be more appreciative and loving!! Loved your fun review. Many thanks.
Wendy
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No, I was talking about my guitar in this instance... she's a true beauty as well... and besides, I'm always very attentive to Jade... she's my best friend, my love!
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Oh that's good. Now get going on those guitar chords and play a love song for Jade (Btw - I was the bad guy in the story! I didn't practise enough, neglected ...)
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite a story that you have written. I agree that young people today sometimes take up different things, and then they lose interest very quickly. It seems that people are just not willing to put out the effort that it takes to learn to do something and do it well. Patricia. Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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This is quite a story that you have written. I agree that young people today sometimes take up different things, and then they lose interest very quickly. It seems that people are just not willing to put out the effort that it takes to learn to do something and do it well. Patricia. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you Patricia. I must confess that I was the bad guy in the story. I had a lovely guitar, but neglected to practise enough (and I don't think I had the skill or put in the time and effort needed.)
Wendy
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This ending came as a surprise. But I have to admit I was hoping it was going to be about one of your neighbor's neglected dogs. Would love to read that story!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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This ending came as a surprise. But I have to admit I was hoping it was going to be about one of your neighbor's neglected dogs. Would love to read that story!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you Ginda. Lovely review. The neighbours dogs are quiet and placid now - and I think they are feeding them better. Both are wearing new collars (and the zapping no-bark collar is off Ada). I think they are unsure if I sent a report to animal welfare or not, and are being extra careful. Mission accompished.
Wendy
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Wendy,
what an interesting story. I certainly didn't know until the end what you were writing about, but it seemed so out of place for you until I finished reading it. I've never had the discipline to play any musical instrument. I love music, but I'm afraid I'll never make my own.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Hello Wendy,
what an interesting story. I certainly didn't know until the end what you were writing about, but it seemed so out of place for you until I finished reading it. I've never had the discipline to play any musical instrument. I love music, but I'm afraid I'll never make my own.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much Tom. Yes, I am like that too. Glad you enjoyed it, and kept going till the end.
Wendy
Comment from K.I. Betancur
Even to the last line, I thought being a "guitar" was symbolic!
Great job throwing most of us for a curve! Definitely enjoyed this one.
I wonder how easy or difficult it was to consider liking a guitar's presence to that of a partner's in a relationship.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Even to the last line, I thought being a "guitar" was symbolic!
Great job throwing most of us for a curve! Definitely enjoyed this one.
I wonder how easy or difficult it was to consider liking a guitar's presence to that of a partner's in a relationship.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for reviewing. I am so pleased you enjoyed it.
Comment from royowen
I've been able to purchase a couple of good buys in instruments when someone dazzled by the prospect of being able to progress in music, found it required a lot of personal space to learn dand discarded cheaply their forlorn ambitions, but beautifully written, to play us as an instrument we need a loving exponent who cares for us, well done blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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I've been able to purchase a couple of good buys in instruments when someone dazzled by the prospect of being able to progress in music, found it required a lot of personal space to learn dand discarded cheaply their forlorn ambitions, but beautifully written, to play us as an instrument we need a loving exponent who cares for us, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thanks Roy. A super review. I liken you to the new owner of the guitar - some-one who will use and cherish a valuable instrument.
Wendy
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Well done Wendy, great post