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StarsEncapsulatedinAGlassteinJar

Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Loneliest Star in the Univer"
Poetry from Another Planet

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I am interested in seeing where you are going to take this. With your creativity I am always left guessing.

But ledt because of Sin. (left?)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
    I've already got most of it completed but I'm not going to present it till this evening here in New Jersey that would be in about 2 hours 7:00 p.m..
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It is a pity you think this star is lonely and sad and this is probably because you feel helpless and want to offer comfort to your son who lost his way, very sad words here Ricky, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
    Well and all actuality this book is based on stars and I most definitely are not or am not a star.
    There is going to be a further addition to this based on Star blazers search for love.
    As for my search, are you available? Dolly?
    Tee, Hee, He!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Brandon Clark
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Another fine example and wonderful addition to your book "StarsEncapsulatedinAGlassteinJar"

Very well written and no revisions or suggestions I have could improve it!

Hope you're doing well!
Brandon

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
    I actually just put in a lot more information about this and thanks for reviewing! Brandon, it will be continued.
    Doctor Ricky 1024