Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I loved the first verse , it is so so true .How else would we describe the loss of time?
The poem has a rare sensitivity .I have read some of the other poems too.Santha.

 Comment Written 13-May-2023

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reply by the author on 13-May-2023

Thanks for the review, Santha. I appreciate your comments about the first verse and the sensitivity in the poem, as well as some of the other poems, as well.

Comment from evilynne

Exceptional

What lovely words of sympathy and hope. It is lovely that you are putting together such a book. I am glad to see that your work has been recognized and deemed all time best. Evi

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Evi. I appreciate your comments about the words of sympathy and hope, as putting together the book, and the poem being recognized. Have a good day and rest of your week!

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Exceptional

Hi Pam,

It was very thoughtful of you to create this book for Judiverse. It's nice when people here pull together as a family.
Your poem seems very comforting and beautifully penned.

I'll check out the others.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Rhonda. I appreciate your comments about the book and pulling together as a family. I am glad you found the poem comforting, and that you plan to check out others. Have a great day and week ahead.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 23-Apr-2023

You, too, Pam!

reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Thanks😊

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

very emotional,very comforting,and very heavenly of you to think of a friend. your poem was special and it was a special read. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem being emotional and comforting, as well as heavenly. I am glad you thought it was a special read.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent poem about death and life after in heaven. I read many poems for Judiverse. Poor thing, loosing someone we love is so hard. You had a good idea creating this book. I'm sure Judi will appreciate it very much.

The free verse forced flows well.

the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, Gypsy. I appreciate your comments about the poem and reading poems for judi. I have been reading them, as well. She has appreciated the poems and the book. I am glad you liked the free verse with emotion and strong images.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Very nicely done. well written. Good work.
Your poem feels musical, enchanting even. It flows very well, natural sounding. Very nice sentiments.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, Wayne. I appreciate your comments about the poem, musicality, flow, and sentiment.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

As the years go by, bringing us closer to the end of this system of things. As God's angels of judgement and punishment flex their wings. the await the day when judgement will be executed on an unrepentant population. Those who love and obey God will be vindicated and will enjoy a loving reunion of those who have preceded us in death. Thus the tide will be reversed and it will return to us those we currently mourn.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, nomi. I appreciate your comments about reaching the end of things and "God's angels" flexing their wings.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Pam.
I have seen several poems now like yours expressing love and empathy for Judy following her loss. I am sure the book will be a comfort to her at this time.

Beautiful words to cosole a friend.

Steve

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, Steve. I appreciate your comments about seeing some of the poems. It means a lot that they are responding, and it is also very meaningful to judi. I am glad you found my poem consoling.

Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Pam,
A beautiful poem and a wonderful idea to post a book for Judiverse
in these difficult times when her partner for so many years has died.
I love the opening lines:

"It seems like time passes
Through our fingers
Like finest grains of sand"

And the perfect closing stanza:

"We'll feel that love
When once again
The waves will kiss
the golden shore
once more..."

Marvelous picture and coloring.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I appreciate your comments about the poem and book, and for sharing the verses you particularly liked, as well as comments about the picture and presentation.

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Nicely done and congrats on the recognition. Words flow with wonderful movement just as if one were listening to the ocean waves 'kissing' the shore with softness. Very good.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thanks for the review, Kaiku. I appreciate your comments about the recognition, the flow of words, and listening to the ocean waves.

reply by Kaiku on 20-Apr-2023

you bet Pam