Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray! Great sharpshooting and of course, you had to get us all worried about Detective Sally's safety but it all worked out! And the bad guy has been formally charged and furthermore, another of the missing girls was found! Virtual six! Used most of my sixes on Saturday. How many chapters until the end?

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and excellent rating. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it. I think probably ten more chapters, maybe, so you?re good for now. It?s hard to say because I have a few more things to write about in this book.

It?s a spiritual journey/thriller/crime fiction/romance. Curves ahead.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

reply by lyenochka on 27-Apr-2023

Oh no! Curves ahead! Just like in real life...

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Of course! ;))

Comment from Carol Clark2

Exceptional

Great chapter! That is quite a list of charges against Fee, and I'm glad he has finally been arrested. It's nice to know the missing Tammy has been identified. So many things happening in this chapter! Great dialogue. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you for the wonderful review and generous six star rating, dear Carol. Both mean the world to me. Thank you again and blessings to you all,
Sally XOs

reply by Carol Clark2 on 29-Apr-2023

Well deserved of the stars! Have a blessed weekend.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

A nice ending g to a most horrible incident.
Well written Rich in Theme design and Imagery design.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this Sally and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023

Thank you, Doctor Ricky! I?m glad you enjoyed it. Blessings,
Sal :))

Comment from country ranch writer

Exceptional

Well maybe the girls dad will be able to get closer from this time on.
Enjoyed this story seamed so real as I followed you all along the trials and tribulations, through to the end.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Barbara. It means the world to me. Blessings to you all, Sally XOs

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Apr-2023

🐊👀🐕🐾🐾🐸👀

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Apr-2023

🐊👀🐕🐾🐾🐸👀

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

An action-packed chapter in which after a tense stand-off in which Elling was using the detective as a human shield he was eventually shot, and taken to hospital where he was formally arrested. There is still much to be uncovered here and Elling's invocation of the fifth leaves us in suspense as to how much more deeply this evil man's crimes will extend. I await more. Thanks for sharing, Sally. Best wishes Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it. Sending along my very best to you all, Sally :)) XOs

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Fee's arrest wasn't easy, but he didn't cause enough problems. Is there more to come? You did a great job as always, and I'm ready to read more. Have a wonderful day. Shirley

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the excellent review of my book chapter. It?s so appreciated and needed. Blessings to you all, Sally XOs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Part of me was afraid Fitzgerald Edward Elling would have somehow escaped from the hospital. I'm glad he didn't. I can't wait to read more.

The next morning, we headed for the Elling Estate (The following morning & and comma after 'morning'))

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and helpful critique. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs