Cherry Blossom Tea
When Springtime is Ready4 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and nice presentation, Judith.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening lines about the branches and bumblebee.
-The clouds inside your cup is a very good image,
as well as "There was April to compose
Springtime in her silken sleeves."
-A very good concluding line.
-You painting a vivid word picture of
springtime and the cherry blossoms.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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-Lovely image and nice presentation, Judith.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening lines about the branches and bumblebee.
-The clouds inside your cup is a very good image,
as well as "There was April to compose
Springtime in her silken sleeves."
-A very good concluding line.
-You painting a vivid word picture of
springtime and the cherry blossoms.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you Pam.
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You are welcome, Judith.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me want to take tea on my balcony and enjoy the blossom and e welcome in the spring here. Your poem is uplifting and positive and I felt I was wearing a light coloured dress and sitting in Paris enjoying tea opposite the beautiful Parisian gardens, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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You made me want to take tea on my balcony and enjoy the blossom and e welcome in the spring here. Your poem is uplifting and positive and I felt I was wearing a light coloured dress and sitting in Paris enjoying tea opposite the beautiful Parisian gardens, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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I am so pleased that my poem stirred your imagination. How lovely!
Thank you,
Judith
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I have been in Paris in the spring and it is a delightful place to be Judith x x x
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I have never been to Paris I know it is just gorgeous. That is my first choice if I take a vacation.
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You will not be disappointed, you need to go to Venice too x x x
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Very beautiful poem about one particular time of year. I love your descriptive colorful words, they, and the beautiful artwork, bring your words to life further. Good writing, once again! :)) Alex
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Very beautiful poem about one particular time of year. I love your descriptive colorful words, they, and the beautiful artwork, bring your words to life further. Good writing, once again! :)) Alex
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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You are a blessing
Thank you
Judith
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful ode to nature! You seem to be very close to nature!! I like the rhyming pattern and the cadence of the poem. The last verse is a pearl: she can always read the leaves!!
Lovely
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Beautiful ode to nature! You seem to be very close to nature!! I like the rhyming pattern and the cadence of the poem. The last verse is a pearl: she can always read the leaves!!
Lovely
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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That last line is not just about Spring but about my sister!
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I have read the poem again. Thank you for clarifying!!
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The poem it IS about Spring. But that last line? It is ALSO a little bit about my sister