Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 139 "Quill Deep in Crimson Blood"Romantic Tanka Poems
20 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This poem was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. I always enjoy your poetry, but I don't always know what to say about it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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This poem was absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking all at once. I always enjoy your poetry, but I don't always know what to say about it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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I get it. You can say anything you feel, there's no wrong review. I just ask for kind feedback.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deeply moving write with much hurt inside these words as we are full of sorrow when a love is dying, a powerful write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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This is a deeply moving write with much hurt inside these words as we are full of sorrow when a love is dying, a powerful write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from karenina
Oh, well ~ yes! This is precisely the feeling, isn't it? There is no pain quite as stunning as the loss of love once thought so true, so destined to be forever! This is the perfect tanka metaphor for "bleeding onto the page."
We write because we feel!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Oh, well ~ yes! This is precisely the feeling, isn't it? There is no pain quite as stunning as the loss of love once thought so true, so destined to be forever! This is the perfect tanka metaphor for "bleeding onto the page."
We write because we feel!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Karenina, you write beautiful insightful reviews. I'm happy you got the meaning, not everyone does.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Miss you!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanka poem - nice picture presentation compliments the poem- good use of metaphors to describe- using ('bout) achieved word syllable count- gave it meter- nice- suggest (an) emotions -emotions starts with a vowel-grammar- good job AP
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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I like your tanka poem - nice picture presentation compliments the poem- good use of metaphors to describe- using ('bout) achieved word syllable count- gave it meter- nice- suggest (an) emotions -emotions starts with a vowel-grammar- good job AP
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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No, I don't need ''(an) emotions'', ''emotions'' is right.
Thank you very much for the review and kind words, I am very grateful.
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No
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am learning a bit about haikus and will now have to learn about tankas. I'll click on your links.
I enjoyed reading this one of yours, which is why I want to learn more. I've never really reviewed your work because I didn't want to say the wrong things and look a total idiot! lol. I thought this one was so sad, from beginning to end. The presentation, red on black, worked perfectly and the picture is beautiful. Well done! :) Sandra
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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I am learning a bit about haikus and will now have to learn about tankas. I'll click on your links.
I enjoyed reading this one of yours, which is why I want to learn more. I've never really reviewed your work because I didn't want to say the wrong things and look a total idiot! lol. I thought this one was so sad, from beginning to end. The presentation, red on black, worked perfectly and the picture is beautiful. Well done! :) Sandra
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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You don't have to be an expert to review my work. Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words, I am very grateful. I hope all is well with you.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The redness in this poem sure puts a sparkle in your writing. Even though you are speaking about dying love, I think it will ignite again when someone see the beauty of your poem.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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The redness in this poem sure puts a sparkle in your writing. Even though you are speaking about dying love, I think it will ignite again when someone see the beauty of your poem.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words, I am very grateful. I hope all is well with you.
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen!
You do sorrow and heartbreak with a realistic and true emotional connection that is always so believable to the reader... well, this one for sure.
Your layout is also always impeccable and only adds girth to your words.
It's a true pleasure to read and be stalled in thought as I read the words that demand my attention. A beautifully constructed and composed tanka Gypsy Queen.
With our thoughts we create...
a new chapter.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen!
You do sorrow and heartbreak with a realistic and true emotional connection that is always so believable to the reader... well, this one for sure.
Your layout is also always impeccable and only adds girth to your words.
It's a true pleasure to read and be stalled in thought as I read the words that demand my attention. A beautifully constructed and composed tanka Gypsy Queen.
With our thoughts we create...
a new chapter.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Hello, James,
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review and insightful feedback. I have enough grief in my life to inspire a million poems... well maybe a bit less .... but I think you know what I mean. It's easy to write about what I know. I have a huge crush on an actor and that is inspiring me to write love poems, not this one, fun ones about love, lust, and yearning. I also have some experience on that.
Your reviews are always so on point... you really know what my poems are about.
Big hugs, my friend, may you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist". - Picasso
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It's always a true pleasure to be emotionally connected through your beautiful poems Gypsy Queen whether they happy, sad, passionate, environmental... they all show the talent and clarity to inspire.
Comment from Brandon Clark
Great job on this. The verbal imagery is excellent and the whole poem presents well. Pace and flow are perfect as well as word choice. I see nothing to correct or improve; great just how you wrote it!
Outstanding work!
Brandon
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Great job on this. The verbal imagery is excellent and the whole poem presents well. Pace and flow are perfect as well as word choice. I see nothing to correct or improve; great just how you wrote it!
Outstanding work!
Brandon
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words, I am very grateful.
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Comment from royowen
I like the way you described the "choppiness" of the western interpretation of Japanese tanka, one doesn't need the regimentation of a strict word count to produce a meaningful poem, well done my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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I like the way you described the "choppiness" of the western interpretation of Japanese tanka, one doesn't need the regimentation of a strict word count to produce a meaningful poem, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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A pleasure
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is mysteriously written. I pause wondering why the blood. I understand the dying love, but... I can't help but focus on the blood, her blood, his blood, or just a metaphor. I prefer to believe it's a metaphor, so no blood was shed.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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This poem is mysteriously written. I pause wondering why the blood. I understand the dying love, but... I can't help but focus on the blood, her blood, his blood, or just a metaphor. I prefer to believe it's a metaphor, so no blood was shed.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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It's a poetic metaphor. Some feelings are very raw and we find hard to put them on paper. You know, you are a writer. that the woman is writing with her blood gives you and idea how much pain she is going through.
Thank you very much, Barbara. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs