Insomniac's Lament
A little shut eye please.3 total reviews
Comment from Julie Lau
My sympathies! I had an ornamental pond put in at the side of my house. Next time my nature-loving son-in-law came to visit, after a sleepless night, he wanted to pull the heads off all the frogs in that pond!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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My sympathies! I had an ornamental pond put in at the side of my house. Next time my nature-loving son-in-law came to visit, after a sleepless night, he wanted to pull the heads off all the frogs in that pond!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the review. We have a pond, too. These guys are screamers!
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We had one who sounded as if he were in a large, echoing saucepan!
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Eww
Comment from Un1qu3
I like that fact that it's believable, I too have trouble sleeping at times , but the ending, I feel could use some work. I feel most people don't see frogs as evil....
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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I like that fact that it's believable, I too have trouble sleeping at times , but the ending, I feel could use some work. I feel most people don't see frogs as evil....
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Neither do I after a good night's sleep.
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The prompt on this was a Haiku with humor, thus the evil frogs.
Comment from pome lover
sounds like you have the window open :)
Maybe put on some soft, pretty music to put you to sleep.
OR get a B B Gun. Or a dog or cat. I'm out of suggestions. No. One more. Move?
Good 5-7-5.
Katharine
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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sounds like you have the window open :)
Maybe put on some soft, pretty music to put you to sleep.
OR get a B B Gun. Or a dog or cat. I'm out of suggestions. No. One more. Move?
Good 5-7-5.
Katharine
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Thanks for the review, Katharine, and the suggestions. :-)