Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

That's so funny. The photo is an absolute classic. I had a cat who, even in her last dying days, would position herself to frighten the poodle as she tentativly entered. JL

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Of course, cats rule. I could see this as I read
it, Mystery Author. Great job with the syllable
count per line. The picture plus your words made
a fun statement. I'm sure all cats agree--poor dog.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you!❤🙂

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness a dog is trying to get through the cat flap, but the cat had other ideas! What a fun picture and I wish you luck with your 5-7-5 here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you! I hope I win first place!

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

I don't care a bout that = 6 syllables


other than that oops, this was a fun little poem

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest

shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you! I have made the correction.