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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Popcorn"NaPoWriMo 2023
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Hi, this is quite amusing, because it reminded me of those years with the children making popcorn - eating a lot myself, but most of all burning my fingers! Well done, you really nailed the subject Giddy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Hi, this is quite amusing, because it reminded me of those years with the children making popcorn - eating a lot myself, but most of all burning my fingers! Well done, you really nailed the subject Giddy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
I'm reading your poem just as my husband popped microwave popcorn so "It fills the air like a county fair;" is a real feeling for me now. I enjoyed your 5-7-5 in the beginning especially the "explosive snacking" and "Shall no corn kernel go unpopped." Now I better get a few without burning my fingers!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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I'm reading your poem just as my husband popped microwave popcorn so "It fills the air like a county fair;" is a real feeling for me now. I enjoyed your 5-7-5 in the beginning especially the "explosive snacking" and "Shall no corn kernel go unpopped." Now I better get a few without burning my fingers!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
Sounds delicious. No, you definitely need a movie with that! (lol).
Thanks for the great recipe, sounds yummy but my new diet will preclude that.
Loved the fun, great imagery and visuals and a terrific picture.
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Sounds delicious. No, you definitely need a movie with that! (lol).
Thanks for the great recipe, sounds yummy but my new diet will preclude that.
Loved the fun, great imagery and visuals and a terrific picture.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
Comment from Sanku
This is really a fun poem I liked it when you described pop corn as explosive snacking
It does not have much food value but it really is a fun snack only trouble is that one tends to go on popping it into the mouth.
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This is really a fun poem I liked it when you described pop corn as explosive snacking
It does not have much food value but it really is a fun snack only trouble is that one tends to go on popping it into the mouth.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like an exciting exercise as those popping corns make a great sound and they are so delicious with salt or butter, I enjoyed the ride here Alicia, what movies shall be watch? Love Dolly x x x
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This sounds like an exciting exercise as those popping corns make a great sound and they are so delicious with salt or butter, I enjoyed the ride here Alicia, what movies shall be watch? Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Fun, original and informative post! Beautiful image making your mouth water already. The combination of the two verses complete a well presented and "delicious" presentation. I particularly like: It fills the air like a county fair; shall no corn kernel go unpopped. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
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Fun, original and informative post! Beautiful image making your mouth water already. The combination of the two verses complete a well presented and "delicious" presentation. I particularly like: It fills the air like a county fair; shall no corn kernel go unpopped. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
Comment from royowen
I think you might like food dear Alicia, I think I'm with you there. But there is a lot of foods named, I never heard of them, and yet I've spent some extended times in the US, well done My friend, blessings Roy
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I think you might like food dear Alicia, I think I'm with you there. But there is a lot of foods named, I never heard of them, and yet I've spent some extended times in the US, well done My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023