Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 137 "Bittern Birds Pad"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from aryr
This was indeed a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The pictures were very realistic and your words were fantastic. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This was indeed a wonderful tanka, Gypsy. The pictures were very realistic and your words were fantastic. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Cherish Adams
I love this piece. Nature and all it brings is lovely. You capture it well plus the education you provide to us completes the mental picture. Cherish :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I love this piece. Nature and all it brings is lovely. You capture it well plus the education you provide to us completes the mental picture. Cherish :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The bottom picture looks almost like a cross between a lizard and a bird. The top picture looks like a bird for sure. I enjoyed reading your poem. I did a little research to see if they were here in Texas and there's possibly some around the coast. I guess they can breed in the panhandle. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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The bottom picture looks almost like a cross between a lizard and a bird. The top picture looks like a bird for sure. I enjoyed reading your poem. I did a little research to see if they were here in Texas and there's possibly some around the coast. I guess they can breed in the panhandle. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
this was cool -
they hide from the crowd
away from lookie loos <-- totally sounds like me LOL!
love the bopping on down line, too!
great tanka!
thank you for sharing :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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this was cool -
they hide from the crowd
away from lookie loos <-- totally sounds like me LOL!
love the bopping on down line, too!
great tanka!
thank you for sharing :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Yardier
Beautiful work as usual. I enjoy watching birds in the morning with my coffee. We have a few swampy areas in the county that are habited by beautiful white egrets. Now, I will look a little closer into the reeds to see if I can locate a bittern.
Thanks for sharing.
Yard.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Beautiful work as usual. I enjoy watching birds in the morning with my coffee. We have a few swampy areas in the county that are habited by beautiful white egrets. Now, I will look a little closer into the reeds to see if I can locate a bittern.
Thanks for sharing.
Yard.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I see they are introverts like me and are home bodies. And dressed like that, those bitterns can become nearly invisible among the reeds. Thanks for sharing about these birds!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I see they are introverts like me and are home bodies. And dressed like that, those bitterns can become nearly invisible among the reeds. Thanks for sharing about these birds!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Yes, I'm an introvert too.
Thank you, big sister!
Love,
Marival ❤️
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your tanks poem- nice picture presentation- poem has good flow- especially the first stanza -meter- cute tone - away from the lookie loo's - bop on down " I think I used say that. (nice lol- good job-AP-
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I like your tanks poem- nice picture presentation- poem has good flow- especially the first stanza -meter- cute tone - away from the lookie loo's - bop on down " I think I used say that. (nice lol- good job-AP-
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is great Gypsy! Not only as your poem well written, it also is informative and provides a learning experience!
You're an old school or as equally gifted. For what I think you are the entire experience well done!
Grammatically And aesthetically pleasing I find no issues for suggestions for correction as this is extremely well done as is.
Good luck I hope you have a smashing evening l o l!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This is great Gypsy! Not only as your poem well written, it also is informative and provides a learning experience!
You're an old school or as equally gifted. For what I think you are the entire experience well done!
Grammatically And aesthetically pleasing I find no issues for suggestions for correction as this is extremely well done as is.
Good luck I hope you have a smashing evening l o l!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Your welcome!
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Your welcome!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was an enjoyable read. I heard long 'e' assonance with 'deep' and 'reeds' in line one. There was 'b' alliteration in the last two lines on emphasized words. I thought this helped capture a slice of bird life. Those bitterns have quite a life. Thanks for sharing a modern tanka.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This was an enjoyable read. I heard long 'e' assonance with 'deep' and 'reeds' in line one. There was 'b' alliteration in the last two lines on emphasized words. I thought this helped capture a slice of bird life. Those bitterns have quite a life. Thanks for sharing a modern tanka.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs