Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very beautifully written Tanka poem you have penned about spring. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work. I love the colors you used on each line! Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Teri

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Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is just stunning in words and in a presentation by this well-written Tanka poem. I love the image of and the personification of Spring.
We just had two days of unusual warmth, and the trees and flowers just exploded in color.
Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....I like the closing line of "Crowned with dusk," very image evocationy--figured this needed a new word to make my reveiw stand out!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This is a lovely tanka, and the picture illustrates it very well. I love the personification for the queen of spring. The last line is my favorite, "and crowned with dusk."

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from Cherish Adams

Excellent

The beauty this world offers is often indescribable. Yet your choice of words seem to do just the opposite. This is beautiful. Great work.
Cherish :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh, this is good. From the mountain top to the valleys or hillside covered with marigolds. That would be a sight to see. I would love to view that in real life. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like your Tanka poem - excellent picture presentation - every colorful - goods word count - poem has a good visual effect - mother nature can see as far as the eye can see across the field of marigolds - nice
Good job - AP

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm wondering who is the "Queen of Spring" - just Nature in springtime? I wonder why she is "crowned with dusk" as that makes it feel like something is ending. But the presentation is pretty even if I didn't get the message.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

It's a pure poetic poem, not to be taken literally. I mainly use personification of nature. I'm sorry you didn't get the message, it's the first one from you.

Thank you very much for your time and helpfull feedback.

Love,

Marival

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Beautiful presentation on this well written Tanka poem. I like how the font and photo pleases the eyes and how the words create further visual and feel on the breathtaking moments of emerging spring. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful weekend.

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reply by PoemsOfDD on 14-Apr-2023

Happy weekend to you too. ~D🌸

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh i love that "crowned with dusk" line!
a different and very cool way of describing a sunset!


nice tanka!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, my friend. May you have a wonderful weekend.

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