Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello,
Your senryu is well written and presented. Perfect syllable count and wise words shared in the satori line.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

Thanks.

Comment from Gina Schneller

Excellent

Hi there! I just wrote a similar poem. I feel like the fear of illnesses like cancer are starting to affect me and how I am living. Had a scare and now I feel like it is stuck w me. Love your words. Thank you for sharing your writing with us all! Best of luck in your writing journey! :)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

I try not to dwell on my mortality, but I do, now that I am over 65. Thank you for making me feel less alone.