Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 135 "Riding Jasmine Winds"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Eternal Muse
What a gorgeous Tanka, Gypsy. It's visuals and imagery are incredible. Love imagery at its best.
Love the blending of colors and your terrific artwork.
Thumbs up!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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What a gorgeous Tanka, Gypsy. It's visuals and imagery are incredible. Love imagery at its best.
Love the blending of colors and your terrific artwork.
Thumbs up!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much! for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Cherish Adams
I agree with romantic poem in good taste. Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry. Love that it is in good taste. Well written. Cherish :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I agree with romantic poem in good taste. Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry. Love that it is in good taste. Well written. Cherish :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Hi gypsy, you have here a splendid sensuous poem, which I really enjoyed reading. I thought the colouring was especially beautiful and well executed. Your skills with haiku are a great example.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Hi gypsy, you have here a splendid sensuous poem, which I really enjoyed reading. I thought the colouring was especially beautiful and well executed. Your skills with haiku are a great example.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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How are you doing? It's good to hear from you.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words are filled with romance. Very unique poem. I have written romance and kind of left the imagination to the reader. I felt better about my decision/idea because of the younger generation (grandchildren and great grandchildren.) But it's up to the author to make her own decision.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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The words are filled with romance. Very unique poem. I have written romance and kind of left the imagination to the reader. I felt better about my decision/idea because of the younger generation (grandchildren and great grandchildren.) But it's up to the author to make her own decision.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, your presentation is perfect, the artwork, the color, the word choices. Absolutely perfect. This poem is very sensual and emotional, yet very innocent. This is another great job.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Once again, your presentation is perfect, the artwork, the color, the word choices. Absolutely perfect. This poem is very sensual and emotional, yet very innocent. This is another great job.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and an nice clean way to describe doing the big nasty....or at least I think I recall the experience----been a long time and my recollection may be playng tricks on me!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and an nice clean way to describe doing the big nasty....or at least I think I recall the experience----been a long time and my recollection may be playng tricks on me!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a delightful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were totally inspiring because they spoke of the flames of that bed. Your word enticed the feelings of love, of desire and of passion. The roses addressed that love. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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What a delightful tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were totally inspiring because they spoke of the flames of that bed. Your word enticed the feelings of love, of desire and of passion. The roses addressed that love. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
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You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is so beautiful and sensuous, Marival. As I've often told you, all your poems are spectacular. And you have an artist's eye when it comes to the presentation as well.
I like the idea of riding jasmine winds.
BTW, congratulations on winning the contest.
Gracias por compartir. Besos.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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This is so beautiful and sensuous, Marival. As I've often told you, all your poems are spectacular. And you have an artist's eye when it comes to the presentation as well.
I like the idea of riding jasmine winds.
BTW, congratulations on winning the contest.
Gracias por compartir. Besos.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Gracias, guapa, aprecio tu felicitaciones (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Very good taste! Beautifully expressed in this verse form. The imagery is exquisite, so gentle and romantic and the presentation perfect. Well done. Take care, Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Very good taste! Beautifully expressed in this verse form. The imagery is exquisite, so gentle and romantic and the presentation perfect. Well done. Take care, Debbie
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, and kind feedback.
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Comment from royowen
What an excellent post, as usual ypu do all these marvellous things so well, presentation, language, colour choice and a poem par excellence, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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What an excellent post, as usual ypu do all these marvellous things so well, presentation, language, colour choice and a poem par excellence, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Most welcome