Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Seasons of Faith - II"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
18 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Well. If politicians would stop posturing and express "climate change" from your divine perspective there would be far more hope in my heart that mankind would truly begin to realize that our own "free will" is poisoning us, and our world...
God does not seek to destroy us. It seems we're "hell-bent" on doing that to ourselves!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Well. If politicians would stop posturing and express "climate change" from your divine perspective there would be far more hope in my heart that mankind would truly begin to realize that our own "free will" is poisoning us, and our world...
God does not seek to destroy us. It seems we're "hell-bent" on doing that to ourselves!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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We are so fortunate to have a benevolent Master.
Comment from bob cullen
This is both brilliantly written and a stark warning to mankind. We've been provided with all we need, but sadly we seek more. Obviously, we don't learn from the mistakes of the past. We are greedy and we demand more. Let's hope we learn one day. And let's hope one day we learn to show gratitude.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This is both brilliantly written and a stark warning to mankind. We've been provided with all we need, but sadly we seek more. Obviously, we don't learn from the mistakes of the past. We are greedy and we demand more. Let's hope we learn one day. And let's hope one day we learn to show gratitude.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Bob, thank you! ever so slowly, I believe that tide is turning. Like most people I pray fervently for my eight grandchildren that they will find themselves in world respecting all sentient beings and Mother Earth.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This shows us how mankind has misused what God provided us.
I have some possible edits to maybe make it read more smoothly in areas.
I think it can be Birds of all colors and their songs filled the air.
It could be oceans have been over fished instead of fishes.
For grammatical correctness, it should be has 'driven' some crazy.
I like the little bit of hope at the end that maybe we can see what we've done to make Mother Nature mad and appease her so we can go back
to 'normal' weather.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Hi Jim,
This shows us how mankind has misused what God provided us.
I have some possible edits to maybe make it read more smoothly in areas.
I think it can be Birds of all colors and their songs filled the air.
It could be oceans have been over fished instead of fishes.
For grammatical correctness, it should be has 'driven' some crazy.
I like the little bit of hope at the end that maybe we can see what we've done to make Mother Nature mad and appease her so we can go back
to 'normal' weather.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Joan, I can?t express my thanks to you enough!
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Jim,
You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jim, I am enjoying reading the poems you have written for NaPoWriMo. The basis of faith always speaks to me and you are handling it very well. Thanks so much for these lovely verses!
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Hello Jim, I am enjoying reading the poems you have written for NaPoWriMo. The basis of faith always speaks to me and you are handling it very well. Thanks so much for these lovely verses!
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Melissa, please know how much I appreciate your comments, JIm
Comment from nomi338
God will have to step in and thereby prevent the eventual destruction of all life. This is so because there are far too many, and it will remain so until the end. There are far too many who will continue to seek their selfish ends. Satan's influence is not even recognized by those who refuse to recognize God's authority over their lives. They mistake free will for license, never realizing there is consequence for wrong actions, influenced by bad decisions. I pray for my brothers and sisters and the punishment soon to descend upon an unrepentant world.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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God will have to step in and thereby prevent the eventual destruction of all life. This is so because there are far too many, and it will remain so until the end. There are far too many who will continue to seek their selfish ends. Satan's influence is not even recognized by those who refuse to recognize God's authority over their lives. They mistake free will for license, never realizing there is consequence for wrong actions, influenced by bad decisions. I pray for my brothers and sisters and the punishment soon to descend upon an unrepentant world.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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I am very honored by your generous stars and strong validation, thank you so much for the prayers for those who have not yet found the Light of Truth.
Comment from Boogienights
These are very powerful, a great series of poems that she'd light on what God's word means and how it affects our life and feelings. I struggle sometimes to understand what His plan is, but your words make me feel better.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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These are very powerful, a great series of poems that she'd light on what God's word means and how it affects our life and feelings. I struggle sometimes to understand what His plan is, but your words make me feel better.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Boogienights, the fact that you are honest about your struggle shows that your heart, mind and soul are seeking wisdom truth and hope, thanbk you for being a shining example for all.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Seasons of Faith 11, runs through man's fall from grace and the resulting struggle to tear and dig a life away from the rest of the world.
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This free verse, Seasons of Faith 11, runs through man's fall from grace and the resulting struggle to tear and dig a life away from the rest of the world.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent poem detailing the downfall of man and the results of this -nature is suffering and groaning because of man's ineptitude. Very well written, and very thoughtful, but a sad poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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An excellent poem detailing the downfall of man and the results of this -nature is suffering and groaning because of man's ineptitude. Very well written, and very thoughtful, but a sad poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for sharing your comment Wendy.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Many have asked if Eve did not partake of the fruit of knowledge, would she and Adam ever learned about birds and bees humanly? Until, then they rove about unclad, and only afterwards fashioned fig leaves to cover their nethers. Just thinking.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Many have asked if Eve did not partake of the fruit of knowledge, would she and Adam ever learned about birds and bees humanly? Until, then they rove about unclad, and only afterwards fashioned fig leaves to cover their nethers. Just thinking.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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great question for the ages to ponder.
Comment from lyenochka
A gentle way to describe the Fall. It was all so perfect and then everything fell apart but God never gave up on us and He still made a way for us to return to fellowship with Him.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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A gentle way to describe the Fall. It was all so perfect and then everything fell apart but God never gave up on us and He still made a way for us to return to fellowship with Him.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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What a great and wonderful blessing indeed!