Comment from K.I. Betancur

Excellent

Very clever and imaginative! I have no doubt your children inspired you in some shape or form to come up with this.

Thanks for the laughs, congratulations on second place!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023

Thank you! They definitely inspired me on this one, or maybe a doughnut inspired me, I can?t recall. I?m glad you liked it :)

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

okay then... this was a very fun and intriguing poem
quick and smooth rhyme and flow
nice work


thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you! This one is my kids favorite! I?m glad you liked it:)

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

A "sweet" poem sure to please all, but I can also see this as a children's book. Illustrated to match your verse, it would be a treat to read, over and over again. It's a bedtime story for sweet dreams.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thank you so much! This is one I have set aside to hopefully include in a book just like that one day. I have a buddy working on illustrations who can draw WAY better doughnuts than I can. If it ever comes to fruition, I?ll definitely send you a copy for being one of my first supporters! Many thanks :)

reply by Ginda Simpson on 11-Apr-2023

I like the sound of this. Keep at it.