Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023

Thank you so much! Sal XOs

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You're setting the tone: "If we see tracks, we'll call for backup." Is the suspense increasing? "
"The 2022 Mercedes registered to him is still there, and no cab service was reported to have been in the area." Hmmm?? " She was declared dead after a boating accident. The authorities never recovered her body." You areabit ofan imp ..tou got the coffee in:"The faint smell of brewed coffee still hung in the air." We will be back

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Liz dear, thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. Both are greatly appreciated. Blessings back to you and yours.
Sal XOs

reply by Liz O'Neill on 28-Apr-2023

***warm hugs***

Comment from Father Flaps

Exceptional

Hi Sally,
Well, I'm a bit mixed up. In Chapter 21, FEE came out of the log cabin to find a being who looked like an angel. He addressed it as a "spirit", and a few seconds later fired a shot at it. It had to be Patience. Could a bullet harm an angel? I'm thinking not, but I don't know for sure. So my question is, where is the angel? Surely Patience could have handled FEE. But there he is with Willa handcuffed to the truck, and he's got a gun pressed against Detective Sally's head. Where is King? Surely King could bring him down. There hasn't been a shot fired, so is King just waiting for a clear chance at FEE? Would he be that smart to not attack while FEE has the gun pressed against his owner's head?
There are a lot of unanswered questions. King? Patience? And is Betty Jo going to fire the rifle with Madame Detective so close to FEE?
You've left us with a cliffhanger here. Anything could happen.
Great writing, Sally! No errors that need correcting.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

Thank you, dear Kim. How wonderful and generous of you! I?m delighted you liked it. Much is happening so stay tuned. There?s more to go. Hopefully my eyes hold up to finish this book! It is taking much longer to write these days.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Nicely done. You left us in a moment of holding our breath to make sure the shot takes out the target and Willa and Sally aren't harmed. Your story is very exciting and I'll look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It?s so appreciated. Blessings to you all, Sally XOs

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Things are getting exciting! Of course, you couldn't make Fee's capture too easy. But I would like to know how he got away from Patience, or whoever was on the porch.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023

Cindy,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my book chapter. It?s so needed and always appreciated.
Blessings back to you and yours,
Sally XOs

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Oh, dear! You had to leave us hanging there!! Good action sequence, Sal, and you've set this up for an explosive scene.

Well planned and written - can't wait to see Fee fall:-)

xx
Pam

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments. Always a pleasure to see you, dear Pam. Blessings,
Sal XOs

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A dramatic and exciting ending which leaves the reader wanting more. Very well written with good dialogue and a lot of suspense. The dogs are excellent and very reliable in their skills. Well done. Bring on the next chapter!
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the excellent review and comments. Always a pleasure to see you, Wendy dear. Blessings to you all,
Sal XOs

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your story left us hanging for the next chapter. Exciting chapter for sure; what should we expect when they get a little closer to the man named Fee.
Is Simon going to help so they catch him? Or is he going to be one of the suspects, too.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you for the excellent review and comments. No, Simon is a trial witness, as is Candace. Both are staying at the safe house at the Jenkins? farm. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

If he did not take his car, and no cab serviced the area, makes one ponder how he got out and did he receive help doing so?

Should "Thanks to dogs" not be Thanks to the dogs, or just their names, as followers of the story would know they were dogs?

Good, and action-packed cliffhanger ending.

Dialogue throughout flowed naturally for the characters.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you for the excellent rating and comments. The previous chapters of the book answers the question on how Fee left the estate, on foot; and where he's hiding, in the fishing cabin. I leave my readers with things to figure out, but unless you read it like a book, you will be lost. The dogs are visiting and new to the book so I'm just giving my readers a reminder. I have lots of characters in this story and angels and demons coming and going.
Blessings, Sal

Comment from Carol Clark2

Exceptional

What a great way to leave your readers wondering! Great story, and a great chapter. The dialogue's perfect, and it moves the story forward nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed week. Carol

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Carol. I am blessed from head to toe. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one. More coming. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo

reply by Carol Clark2 on 19-Apr-2023

You've done such a great job on the book so far. Looking forward to the rest. Blessings.

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023

Thank you, dear! Blessings! :)) Xoxo