Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. It flowed smoothly. I would say from this poem your reality is in pretty good shape. I enjoyed reading.
Oceans satine seas ????????
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
Salt, salty, Satine, Mormons?
Salt Lake?
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
reply by barbara.wilkey on 11-Apr-2023
Wouldn't it be saline then? Just wondering.
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
This is a truly lovely piece in which, if I understand correctly, you're allowing yourself to be taken on a journey through nature to a point where you contemplate the desire to go beyond the physical and be reborn. It's a very stirring and evocative piece, a feast for the senses. Many thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
Thanks ever so much my Dear Deborah D'Arcy.
Doctor Ricky 1024