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Taste of My Reality

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The Pathway to Pain and Misery

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. It flowed smoothly. I would say from this poem your reality is in pretty good shape. I enjoyed reading.

Oceans satine seas ????????

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Salt, salty, Satine, Mormons?
    Salt Lake?
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky
reply by barbara.wilkey on 11-Apr-2023
    Wouldn't it be saline then? Just wondering.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a truly lovely piece in which, if I understand correctly, you're allowing yourself to be taken on a journey through nature to a point where you contemplate the desire to go beyond the physical and be reborn. It's a very stirring and evocative piece, a feast for the senses. Many thanks for sharing, Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thanks ever so much my Dear Deborah D'Arcy.
    Doctor Ricky 1024