Comment from Brandon Clark

Exceptional

Truly an exceptional addition to your book! Every word was carefully considered and there is literally nothing I can suggest that would improve it!

Hoping you're well today and every day! Excellent job!!
Brandon

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

I really appreciate you stopping by and your tremendous review Brandon.
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Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Can tell from your notes why you wrote this.

Goes to show, you try to help some people out like the homeless woman, and end up being the one shafted.

Perhaps moving on as far from her as you can get is for the far better.

Keep looking up!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023

God tests each and every individual in various ways.
Now how you conquer these tasks?
Well that makes you who you are, what you are, and what you will be.
Thanks Brett and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The crucifix is merely a symbol of association, I tend to think of symbols as similar to good luck symbols. Faith doesn't need a relic or a charm for belief, faith is invisible to the eye, but visible to the heart, well done Ricky, , blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023

Unfortunately we are a "Labled Society"
Perceptional Time based.
Based on Pride, activating the "Seven Deadly Sins"
Thanks and enjoy this Beautiful day!
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by royowen on 12-Apr-2023

All sin is deadly, He didn?t die for just seven Ricky,

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am sure this will all be over shortly, or at least I pray it will. Thank you for sharing.

Yes as I'm slowly taking the Power. (comma after 'Yes')

Yes by refusing to sulk or hide. (comma after 'Yes')

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks for reading and adding the corrections Barbara.
Ricky

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Tangled Crucifix, seems to speak to the fight with negativity and the worldly wearing away of the will. Seeking strength in God is how that is fought.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks BilI and I believe that the world is becoming a tangled crucifix.
Yes were we are all suffering for various different reasons because of the way things have been.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is powerful reading with an horrendous back story which obviously tested your faith to the limit. The title gives it particular potency and the whole message of determination and struggle through adversity is dramatically and skilfully conveyed. My favourite stirring command to those who challenged your faith but failed to undermine it: "To cease and desist!" Well done and best wishes, Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Thanks Debbie.
And, I do find some form of journaling relief in all my writings.
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Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Very compelling and strong language, which altogether drive the point. I like the way many of your poems seem to have that "direct conversation " with God.
Great job again, Ricky
**please correct the typo in the last line: "unnecessary" missed a few letters.
Thanks

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Must have missed that in my editing.
(It was a long day yesterday!)

Thanks Mario and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Exceptional

Very poignant and well thought out my friend. This has the feel of a very fast pace to it.

This flowed nicely and came full circle in a unique way. Very good job, Doc.
I enjoy your new pieces.
D

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023

Yes I am a slam poet and each and every time I ride it.
It comes through so quickly.
I can't even believe it!
Straight from the Mind, Broken Heart and Soul.
I present to you and Fanstory too!
Thanks and as always,
Doctor Ricky.1024