Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 132 "Your Number One Fan"Romantic Tanka Poems
16 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good sensory appeal. I could feel the yearning from within. Of special note:
my heart skips a beat when I see you on the street.
(Whether an famous actor or the guy next store, if a person is smitten, their heart will skip a beat.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good sensory appeal. I could feel the yearning from within. Of special note:
my heart skips a beat when I see you on the street.
(Whether an famous actor or the guy next store, if a person is smitten, their heart will skip a beat.)
Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Margaret. It's so good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I've often wondered about being an idol, I think with the weird and wonderful images they present, whether they actually believe their own publicity, you are a perceptive soul Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
I've often wondered about being an idol, I think with the weird and wonderful images they present, whether they actually believe their own publicity, you are a perceptive soul Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy :) it's just for fun.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have never fallen into the classification as a number one fan or a groupie. I'm not exactly sure why. I have known women who were and always thought it was sort of strange. I guess I always figured they were out of my league so why put forth the effect. I did enjoy reading this perfect package.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
I have never fallen into the classification as a number one fan or a groupie. I'm not exactly sure why. I have known women who were and always thought it was sort of strange. I guess I always figured they were out of my league so why put forth the effect. I did enjoy reading this perfect package.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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There is nothing wrong with not be a fan or groupie, we are all different. Thank you very much, Barbara, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and becoming famous scares the crap out of me; some people are unhinged, like some Trump voters and him----see John Lennon
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and becoming famous scares the crap out of me; some people are unhinged, like some Trump voters and him----see John Lennon
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Mike, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You made a vivid picture with this tanka. It's also a quick character assessment. I think I like the best of your writing of poetry, your tankas.
They are strong.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
You made a vivid picture with this tanka. It's also a quick character assessment. I think I like the best of your writing of poetry, your tankas.
They are strong.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Verna, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know the film and it is a horror story, sometimes having a fan can get a little bit too intense and then life threatening too. Being stalked is not healthy, a fine write, dark and scary, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
I know the film and it is a horror story, sometimes having a fan can get a little bit too intense and then life threatening too. Being stalked is not healthy, a fine write, dark and scary, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, Dolly.
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Comment from Ricky1024
This TANKA was another addition to your book entitled,
"Tanka Collection"
Based on a long distance, love from an infatuation by a fan who will never ever get the chance but doesn't stop dreaming!
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
This TANKA was another addition to your book entitled,
"Tanka Collection"
Based on a long distance, love from an infatuation by a fan who will never ever get the chance but doesn't stop dreaming!
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, dr ricky, I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
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Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad. If one is in love with someone who is adored by so many how can she keep her place as the "number one fan"? It would all depend on how much he wants to be adulated by a flock of others.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
That's so sad. If one is in love with someone who is adored by so many how can she keep her place as the "number one fan"? It would all depend on how much he wants to be adulated by a flock of others.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Yeah, Pedro Pascal has of fans. He is very popular. He is from Chile but grew up in the USA. He has acted in broadway and movies since he was in his twenties. He is the whole package: handsome, talented, funny, kind.... sigh ... LoL I am too old to have a crush but there you go.
thank you for the lovely review, big sister. I appreciate it.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. I don't know this actor but I can tell why your heart skip a beat when you saw him on the street. You live in LA so you often run into some routinely?
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
Haha. I don't know this actor but I can tell why your heart skip a beat when you saw him on the street. You live in LA so you often run into some routinely?
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Yes, we run into celebrities all the time.
Thank you very much, Lisa. Have a wonderful night.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem and you have presented it beautifully. I enjoyed reading it and knowing that it is a Japanese form of poetry, God bless and have a good day.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
This is a lovely poem and you have presented it beautifully. I enjoyed reading it and knowing that it is a Japanese form of poetry, God bless and have a good day.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy hugs