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Tanka Collection

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Romantic Tanka Poems

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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has good sensory appeal. I could feel the yearning from within. Of special note:

my heart skips a beat when I see you on the street.

(Whether an famous actor or the guy next store, if a person is smitten, their heart will skip a beat.)

Well-chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. M





 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Margaret. It's so good to hear from you. Have a wonderful night.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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I've often wondered about being an idol, I think with the weird and wonderful images they present, whether they actually believe their own publicity, you are a perceptive soul Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you, Roy :) it's just for fun.

    gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2023
    Of course
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have never fallen into the classification as a number one fan or a groupie. I'm not exactly sure why. I have known women who were and always thought it was sort of strange. I guess I always figured they were out of my league so why put forth the effect. I did enjoy reading this perfect package.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    There is nothing wrong with not be a fan or groupie, we are all different. Thank you very much, Barbara, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and becoming famous scares the crap out of me; some people are unhinged, like some Trump voters and him----see John Lennon

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, Mike, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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You made a vivid picture with this tanka. It's also a quick character assessment. I think I like the best of your writing of poetry, your tankas.
They are strong.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, Verna, it's always good to hear from you. Have a lovely day.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I know the film and it is a horror story, sometimes having a fan can get a little bit too intense and then life threatening too. Being stalked is not healthy, a fine write, dark and scary, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, Dolly.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
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This TANKA was another addition to your book entitled,
"Tanka Collection"
Based on a long distance, love from an infatuation by a fan who will never ever get the chance but doesn't stop dreaming!
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, dr ricky, I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's so sad. If one is in love with someone who is adored by so many how can she keep her place as the "number one fan"? It would all depend on how much he wants to be adulated by a flock of others.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Yeah, Pedro Pascal has of fans. He is very popular. He is from Chile but grew up in the USA. He has acted in broadway and movies since he was in his twenties. He is the whole package: handsome, talented, funny, kind.... sigh ... LoL I am too old to have a crush but there you go.

    thank you for the lovely review, big sister. I appreciate it.

    Love,
    MariVal
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Haha. I don't know this actor but I can tell why your heart skip a beat when you saw him on the street. You live in LA so you often run into some routinely?

Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Yes, we run into celebrities all the time.

    Thank you very much, Lisa. Have a wonderful night.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a lovely poem and you have presented it beautifully. I enjoyed reading it and knowing that it is a Japanese form of poetry, God bless and have a good day.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful night.

    Gypsy hugs